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I Love You, But I Can't Live With You Part - 1

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by pranavi1987, Jul 24, 2018.

  1. periamma

    periamma IL Hall of Fame

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    @pranavi1987 Take care ma. I haven't noticed your sister's message.very sorry to know that you have broken your hands. Take care and I am astonished to see your dedication to give the climax. Thanks to your friend for helping you. You do justice to your writer role. Wish you a speedy recovery and be careful after your recovery too.
     
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    @pranavi1987 Excellent story. Awesome narration. Emotional ending. Wish you great success as a writer
     
  3. pranavi1987

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    Thank you friends for supporting me a lot for the first story.

    Special thanks to @periamma , @Adharv , @peddadas , @ammusatheesh who constantly gave feed back.

    Unfortunately I fell down and broke my hand and still recovering, I could use only one hand to type.

    Thank you so much and I wish you all bless me always like this.
     
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    Take care of ur health Pranavi...we will be waiting for ur next stories
     
  5. periamma

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    @pranavi1987 How are you ma? Hope you are recovering and my wishes for speedy recovery. Take care well. Come with a big bang of stories
     
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    Dear Pranavi
    That was a wonderful love story and loved your narration. It was definitely not like an amateur writing and I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Sorry that I could not comment as I use to read the stories through mobile. But daily I use to check updates on your story. It was a wonder writing and You proved your skills in your first story itself. Could have included more romantic scenes for Vineel and nandu and I loved the character Vineel, his portrayal, his smartness, his love shown for Nandu were too good and enjoyable and when you started the flashback, No one would have expected such a flashback for them.
    Do keep writing. Love you loads. You remember my olden days when I wrote my second story.
    All the very best for your further stories.
    Hope you are also getting on well. Prayers for your speedy recovery too.
     
    Last edited: Nov 25, 2018
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    @pranavi1987 hi ma'am, trust your doing good :)
    Wish happy healthy and prosperous new year
     
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    Thanks Adharv :) Hope you are doing good.
    I am doing good now, I have logged in back today after long time
     
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    Hi Friends,
    How are you all? I had broken my wrist and was on rest for almost 6 weeks, thanks for all your comments and encouragement. Wish you all a very happy new year 2019.

    while I was on bed rest, thinking about what to write next? I got an idea of suspense thriller but I couldnt get answers for some of the logics.

    Then I thought of a love story again and I told my sister about it,

    she said, you had already written a love story , if you write again it might be bored for readers and almost all love stories are same.

    I told her , love story is routine but the plot is little unique and told her the line and she felt little thrilled.

    Like in my earlier story, though it was routine I had a different line like "Two past lovers getting married through arranged marriage setup after a breakup"

    You all liked Nandu and Vineel, I am not going to come up with any such plot this time but want to come up with a cute love story with in 15-20 episodes.

    what do you think? Do you want me to come up with a love story again? until I figure out a different genre.

    share your opinion on this?

    Title of the story I thought is "Nihar weds Niharika"

    Let me k now your opinion on this
     
  10. creativemumma

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    Open to any plot- because with your writing anyways we would be watching a movie
     

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