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I Love You, But I Can't Live With You Part - 1

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by pranavi1987, Jul 24, 2018.

  1. lakssubbu

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    Good to read.. Good writing..:)
     
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    ahh...how about Ravi now?? they should play a prank now..
     
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    Thank you Adharv :cheer:, I am going to miss your updates as story coming to end so soon, It is nice travelling with you all guys since last 3months
     
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    Thank you Rampuri, yes when I got this idea, I didnt thought to write such a big story, only one thing i had in mind, how will be the life of two people, who had a breakup earlier get married in an arranged marriage setup?, based on that point I planned to write a short story of 15 episodes, but with all your blessings it crossed 50.
     
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    Thank you peddadas, you will see how Ravi will react in future episode, story is going to end soon
     
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    Thank you periamma for your lovely feedback, we are almost there, going to end the story soon.
     
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    EPISODE 57

    Even if we were not married, still my precious memory that ring would be with Vinni and he would never had ,told that I bought that ring.

    Thank you Prash bro……………. said Nandu emotionally.

    Prashanth looked at her with happiness in his eyes.

    After our marriage, I thought to forget all the past and start a new life with him, but some or the other incident used to remind me our past.

    I noticed Vineel saved all our memories, I saw that he saved my red bangles too, I felt so emotional that day.

    Vineel and I used to fight for silly things, one day I have asked him to share his computer password, he didn’t share.

    Later I tried some random passwords, then I randomly tried NanduLoveyouforever, he used to say that and it worked.

    Then I understood, he still loves me whole heartedly.

    Later when I saw pics on his computer, I saw Deepu there and got disturbed, later when she came here, I behaved very badly with her, still I feel ashamed of my behavior.

    Rest of the things you all know.

    Yes Nandu, you know Vinni from very long time but still you misunderstood him, I also behaved same as you.

    I have one more doubt said Geetha

    Do you still have doubts? I am tired now said Vineel

    No, this is last one.

    For me, you all cleared the misunderstandings, but for Nandu who cleared the misunderstanding about Deepu?

    I will tell Geetha, you know that Deepu was here in our home one day right? After that day, she said to Vineel, she will never meet him until all misunderstandings are cleared.

    Later you know, I was admitted in hospital, then Deepu came to see me, before she left abroad.

    It was then, I came to know she is Vinni’s cousin. Later Vineel explained , what all happened.

    This is how all misunderstandings are cleared.

    Now, all is well, Don’t think about past at all, let us be happy said Prashanth.

    Our marriage is next month, Nandu and Vineel, I want both of you to be part of our wedding, we need your help.

    Not only help, with out us, you will never get married said Nandu.

    Please Nandu … stop saying that, to fix one marriage it took five years, please leave us teased Prashanth.

    Prashanth you are great than me, To fix our marriage it took five years, but to fix your marriage, it took less than five hours teased Vineel.

    Every one laughed.

    Where is your engagement? Asked Vineel.

    We will be doing it here, Geetha’s family is here and my family will come next week said Prashanth.

    We have to start shopping soon, come now it is getting late, let us go said Prashanth.

    Prashanth and Geetha left.

    After they left Nandu and Vineel sat in their balcony, weather is very cold and it is about to rain.

    I am very happy today Vinni said Nandu.

    Why?

    All these days Geetha was ignoring me, I didn’t know the reason , but today everything is cleared.

    Vineel smiled.

    Weather is very good, what do you remember now? Asked Nandu

    This weather gives me good and bad memories Nandu.

    Good is our childhood, time we spent in rain, games we all played.

    Bad memories are our breakup and once me and Prashanth were very emotional sitting outside his old home.

    I was thinking of you and he was thinking of Sindhu and us, on that day too it was same weather said Vineel.

    We miss Sindhu this day Vinni, had she was there, she would have felt happy by seeing us married and her brother getting married.

    True Nandu, but that is fate, good or bad we have to accept it.

    Both felt very emotional, Vinni asked to divert the mind

    Nandu what would have you done If some other groom had come to see you? If not me?

    I would have rejected? Do you have any doubts? Said Nandu

    What if your parents forced you?

    I accepted because it is you, other wise, I would have fought and cancelled the wedding.

    How many will you cancel? What If your parents force you again for another groom?

    Then I would have you some how reached you , through some one and would have screamed at you “ Stupid ? why don’t you marry me?”

    What If I had married by then?

    Stop it Vinni, I know, If not me , you will never get married that is trust I have on you.

    Why?

    Because, you love me.

    What about you then?

    I Love you and I cant Live with out you.

    Oh my God, what happened?

    Your statement is changed.

    My statement is always this “I Love you and I cant live with out you”, In between it changed to some thing else and now it is back to normal.

    Both of them laughed, come it is getting late.

    Next day Nandu and Vineel got ready for office , then Vineel asked, how long you will work there Nandu? Come and join in our office.

    Why?

    Then I can be with you for full day, teased Vineel

    You don’t want to work then, what will you tell if your Dad ask about revenues?

    I will tell, my revenue is Nandu and I will thank him for giving me costly gift.

    You also tell, to earn Nandu, I left every thing at abroad and came back to India

    Oh My God, they shouldn’t know that ,said Vineel.

    We are married now Vinni, why are you still scared?

    No, our’s is arranged marriage, you also tell like that.

    What if they come to know in future, if they see our pics? Asked Nandu

    Hide them , let my parents feel proud of their achievement.

    I will hide, but some stupid like Ravi will send one day , laughed Nandu.

    What is he doing? Funny guy? We should thank him.

    Who Ravi? We will teach him one lesson , said Nandu.

    You leave him, I will teach when time comes said Vineel.

    Ok, today I am going to mom’s house in lunch, she asked me to come,said Nandu and they both left to office.

    Shanthi cooked Nandu’s favourite dishes and they both started talking.

    Mom, you know what Geetha is getting married to Prashanth.

    Who? Vineel’s friend, he came for your marriage? Is it him?

    Yes mom, arranged marriage, but they both liked and loved each other, you know what, that Prashanth is Ramani aunty son.

    Do you remember Ramani aunty? Who taught me maths?

    Oh is it? So nice Nandu, I remember you tied Rakhi to him as well?

    Yes, he is the one, Prash bro is very nice ma, I am happy Geetha found good husband.

    Shanthi smiled and said , even you also found good husband.

    No ma, I didn’t find good husband said Nandu.

    Shanthi got shocked and asked Nandu are you still thinking of past? It is over Nandu, you have good life now.

    Forget him , I thought you moved on , by Vineel’s love.

    No, ma, I couldn’t move on, all the time I remember him, said Nandu in sad tone to tease mom.

    Nandu, you are not child anymore, Vineel is your husband now, you should always think about him.

    Yes Ma, I am always thinking about him only, said Nandu in smile.

    Shanthi got confused and asked what are you saying?

    Yes Ma, I am always thinking about my once boy friend Vinni and now husband Vineel.

    Shanthi got shocked and asked ? Is it true Nandu?

    Yes, mom, she smiled.

    He is such a good guy , why did you tell me, he cheated you?

    He is your son-in-law now, so for you he is good guy, you don’t know what all he did,That is bigstory, I will tell later said Nandu.

    What ever might be the story, you are happy now and I am happy too said Shanthi.

    Ok mom…… Thank you so much for being pillar of my strength always………… Nandu pulled Shanthi cheeks and said bye ma , going to office now……………………..

    Friends, Thank you for all your wishes and encouragement, with out you guys, it is not at all possible for me to write a story. This is my first story , still you all had encouraged me.

    I am blessed to be with you all from last three months, reading and enjoying my story and next episode will be Climax.

    once again thank you and I miss you all.
     
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  8. periamma

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    @pranavi1987 Any twist in the final episode?i enjoyed your story. My comments were very short as the other readers used all romantic words :blush::blush:.wish you to write more stories.
     
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    Lovely update...loved the way Nandu told her Mom :)
     
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    Dear Pranavi,
    Thank you so much for writing up this story and does not look this is the first story you have written.

    I used to eagerly wait for all the episodes..The first thing I would do is look for any updates from notifications.

    Hope you write any more and Good luck to you.
     
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