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Horror Story : I Am Waiting For You....

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Feb 3, 2018.

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  1. Feb 27, 2018 #81
    VinuthaS

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    Good plot ... still keeping the suspense ...
     
    VinuthaS, Feb 27, 2018
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  2. Feb 28, 2018 #82
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    I simply love Annabelle and Annabelle: Creation. Let's see whether you can make this story as interesting as them!
     
    Tamrakshar, Feb 28, 2018
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  3. Feb 28, 2018 #83
    sumalynux

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    Thanks

    Thanks vinutha
     
    sumalynux, Feb 28, 2018
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  4. Feb 28, 2018 #84
    sumalynux

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    Thanks a lot.. you made my day.. :clapclap:
     
    sumalynux, Feb 28, 2018
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  5. Mar 2, 2018 #85
    Soch

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    What happen Suma?? no updates for 2 days dear. Please post it today :)
     
    Soch, Mar 2, 2018
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  6. Mar 2, 2018 #86
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    sumalynux, Mar 2, 2018
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  7. Mar 2, 2018 #87
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    EPISODE 9

    Lokesh introduced Aryan and Deepika to his wife..

    Baby is adorable..It must be difficult to manage kid and host a function without
    family help na said Deepika

    Yeah true.. Once we are out of country, neighbours and friends become like family,
    btw How many kids do you have asked Lokeshs wife..

    No we just got married a month back said Deepika with a shy.

    Oh sorry..Enjoy the party.. We stay just couple of blocks from this restaurant..
    Please come home sometime.Its nice to have his college mate in same town. said Lokeshs wife..

    Deepika and Aryan sat in a table.. Aryan do you know anyone in this party asked Deepika..

    No Deepika, i think most of the crowd is his colleagues and neighbours....If its boring we
    can start after cake cutting said .. said Aryan.

    Its ok we will have lunch and go.. said Deepika...

    After sometime there was cake cutting, followed by a buffet lunch..

    Ok we are done with registering for driving classes, lunch also over.. Any grocery shopping asked Aryan..

    No we can go home... Hopefully i can finish all the grocery shopping if i learn driving said Deepika..

    Yes Once you learn driving, you can drive to all nearby place it will be a good practise said Aryan..

    Hmm , Lokesh is your MS batch mate right ? You dint invite him for our marriage,
    nor did he invite you for his kids birthday earlier. Why is that asked Deepika

    I was not that close to him, I have very less friends.. Raghu was my engineering batch mate and we
    both came to usa to do masters. So he was my roomate also here.. I used to spend most of time with him.. Others were just batch mates... said Aryan

    Oh is he same person you said married his colleague and moved to india asked Deepika..

    Yes hes the one... After having kid his wife wanted to move india to be near to her parents.
    So they moved..

    Oh looks like all your college mates already have kids said Deepika..

    Yes, we can also have a baby soon if you cooperate winked Aryan...

    Suddenly a truck hit a car and crashed 2 cars infront of Aryans car.. Aryans car was also hit, and
    cars front window glass broke and caused incised wounds on Aryans face.. shockingly there was no single wound on Deepikas face...

    Cops arrived immediately and arranged for ambulance for people who were hurt...
    Aryan was giving some details to cop.. Deepika turned towards the truck..

    She saw the young girl sitting on the trucks driver seat with a wicked smile...

    Ok Deepika lets go to hospital said Aryan... Deepika broke out crying.. She was shaken
    by the accident and scared seeing the young girl.. But she was not in a position to tell it to Aryan

    Dont cry Deepika i will just need small stitches.. We are very lucky today, we narrowly escaped the crash. said Aryan
     
    sumalynux, Mar 2, 2018
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  8. Mar 2, 2018 #88
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    Oh my god!!! Such a scary twist in the story. Great going Suma.
    Chitralekha
     
    chitra_lekha, Mar 2, 2018
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  9. Mar 2, 2018 #89
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    Is that small gal someone related to Raghu :thinking:
     
    shravs3, Mar 2, 2018
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  10. Mar 2, 2018 #90
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    Good one.. waiting for the next post
     
    sapthu02, Mar 2, 2018
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