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Horror Story : I Am Waiting For You....

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Feb 3, 2018.

  1. raji2678

    raji2678 Gold IL'ite

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    Thrilling twist
     
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    Vedhavalli Gold IL'ite

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    Is Aryan the father of the child??
    Good going!!!
     
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    creativemumma Gold IL'ite

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    Ohh now its Aryan at the recieving end and all this to convey something to Deepika?
     
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    Hi suma... I usually don't visit IL much. That too fiction. But just glanced upon this post in recent posts and I liked the story. Read all epis at once.

    My guess : Aryan had a girlfriend who might be pregnant with his child and she did suicide as he didn't love her or left her

    Second possibility: it was Aryans roommate raghu's girlfriend's kid whom raghu killed or she did suicide and somehow aryan helped him in leading to her death so now she wants to take revenge!

    Would love to read more and see if my prediction is true :p
     
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    VinuthaS Silver IL'ite

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    Hey Suma waiting for the next episode .. I know the guessing game will no end so soon... also poor newly wed, they have no time for each other ... only facing all the negetive things...
    Good going...
     
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    sumalynux IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you very much...


    Ha ha ha super guess. You can easily write story with your imagination....
    Lets in coming episodes if your Guess is right..
     
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    It was 9pm when Deepika and Aryan reached home.. Aryan was given pain killers and there was small stitch on his forehead.

    Thank god it was so close to eyes.. If i take rest for couple of days i should be fine. Please prepare
    something will eat food and take tablets said Aryan.

    Haan.. What... Yes yes will prepare something said Deepika who seemed to be in her own thoughts.

    Aryan went to his bedroom.. Deepika went to kitchen to prepare dinner..

    I dont know how to make Aryan believe. He wont believe if i said i saw the girl. Is she a ghost.. Why is she bothering us. Deepika was too confused and scared...

    Deepika is it ready asked Aryan.

    Yes Aryan come down. I just prepared little curd rice and brinjal curry, said Deepika serving food..

    Its enough. I just want to get some rest. Hope this pain killers help me get good sleep... said Aryan struggling to chew food...

    Aryan dozed to sleep immediately after dinner... Deepika ate some curd rice. Cleared the plates and went to bedroom.. Even Deepika was very tired she feel asleep in next 15mins...

    Around 12am.

    Deepika's bedspread was pulled.. She turned other side and tried to sleep. This time it was pulled hard. She woke up and saw closet door was shaking. Deepika gathered some courage and opened closet.. She dint find anything there... She turned back and saw same young girl sitting in the bed..

    She was trying to squeeze Aryans neck..

    No no stop.. Please.. Who are you, what do you want screamed Deepika...

    Deepika are you alright ?? whimpered Aryan in pain.

    Oh its a dream.. I had a nightmare... I am sorry.. You go back to sleep said Deepika...

    Deepika tried to reach the hanuman chalisa book under her pillow.. She felt relieved after finding it.. She got out of bed.. Drank some water and Chanted some mantras...

    Deepika tried to get back to sleep, but she couldn't.. Deepika called her mom..

    Deepika isnt it midnight for you.. Dint you sleep asked her mother.

    Deepika told her mother everything including accident, and seeing a girl in truck....
    After keeping Hanuman book near pillow, lighting lamp near god and chanting mantras i feel that
    ghost is not coming inside.. I once saw her sitting and crying near mail box.. I am very scared mom, this time we merely escaped from accident..

    What Aryan met with an accident....Suchitra dint tell me anything, hows he now asked her mother.

    Hes ok mom. Just small stitch on forehead and few scratches on cheeks and neck.. Hes taken tablets and taking rest... We haven't told his mom yet.... said Deepika..

    Did you tell Aryan, about you seeing a ghost asked her mom..

    No mom i tried telling Aryan couple of times. Hes not believing me.. He feels i am imagining things..
    We need to do something before this ghost takes our lives said Deepika..

    Okay i believe you.. Calm down. I will talk to Suchitra tomorrow and see what can be done.. Be brave.. Take care of Aryan... Now get some sleep. Will call you morning said her mother...
     
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    True. They haven't consummated their marriage yet.. It would only be after getting rid of young girl ghost..
     
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    Yeah.. It's time we give some hits to Aryan so he believes Deepika and together get rid of ghost..
     

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