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Home alone one night!!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by mansimahi, Jan 9, 2012.

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  1. Jan 13, 2012 #41
    shakambari

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    Wow...
    Nice post-goose bumps all over me!Do post more...
     
    shakambari, Jan 13, 2012
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  2. Jan 13, 2012 #42
    Sofea

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    Hey Mansi! This is really good gal! :thumbsup And what a superb twist! I love horror stories (even thought of writing one myself) and yours is definitely one of the better ones I've read in recent times. Great job! :thumbsup
     
    Sofea, Jan 13, 2012
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  3. Jan 13, 2012 #43
    nnarmadha

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    I cant sleep alone in night thereafter.. Very scred after reading this story.. Story Ended up with big suspense and thrilling
     
    nnarmadha, Jan 13, 2012
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  4. Jan 13, 2012 #44
    ILoveTulips

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    Another wonderful writeup from you mansi.. Your narration is so gripping and brought life to the characters on paper. thats brilliant way to keep the readers on the scary path and take them to an unprepared turn. I enjoyed reading it the same way as all your other posts... keep coming with many stories dear mm....:)

    ilt
     
    ILoveTulips, Jan 13, 2012
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  5. Jan 14, 2012 #45
    mansimahi

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    Thanks narmada ...hope noone comes knocking at your door !!! :D
     
    mansimahi, Jan 14, 2012
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  6. Jan 14, 2012 #46
    mansimahi

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    aww..thanks ILT !!!
     
    mansimahi, Jan 14, 2012
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  7. Jan 23, 2012 #47
    vjbunny

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    Dear Mitha...
    Breath taking story...you have maintained the mystery till the end...unless one guesses at this conversation

     
    vjbunny, Jan 23, 2012
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  8. Feb 24, 2012 #48
    krithika20

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    Wonderful story !!!!!!!!!
     
    krithika20, Feb 24, 2012
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  9. Feb 24, 2012 #49
    iCool

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    Spooky....i loved it
     
    iCool, Feb 24, 2012
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  10. Feb 25, 2012 #50
    saarang

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    Oh good story... Scary!!!
     
    saarang, Feb 25, 2012
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