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Home alone one night!!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by mansimahi, Jan 9, 2012.

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  1. Jan 10, 2012 #21
    nicolprism

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    hi A nice one to read... I could guess half way through that the end of the story. A good one. Pl write more..
     
    nicolprism, Jan 10, 2012
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  2. Jan 10, 2012 #22
    swaran

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    nice post....i was expecting something funny but it turned to be a real ghost story :bonk
     
    swaran, Jan 10, 2012
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  3. Jan 10, 2012 #23
    VinuSam143

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    OMG... What a story.. !!

    I really got scared and searched for here and there while reading like anybody is near me....

    A good one dear.
     
    VinuSam143, Jan 10, 2012
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    deepa10

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    WOW great one!!
     
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  5. Jan 10, 2012 #25
    mansimahi

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    Thanks Aruna :) Karan johar was waiting but i wrote a story for Ramsay brothers instead :)
     
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  6. Jan 10, 2012 #26
    Mindian

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    hey mansi,

    a real good one :thumbsup spoooooky ,,had a touch of the movie sixth sense.
    now I have to stay alone for a week..do not blame me if I call you up in the middle of the night feeling scared and haunted.:)
     
    Mindian, Jan 10, 2012
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  7. Jan 10, 2012 #27
    kanaka Raghavan

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    very very absorbing.Did not feel like leaving it half way through.very well written.
     
    kanaka Raghavan, Jan 10, 2012
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  8. Jan 10, 2012 #28
    mansimahi

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    Thanks kanaka .. !!!
     
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  9. Jan 10, 2012 #29
    mansimahi

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    hahaha - yeah in bollywood parlance ...my story is "inspired" from "sixth sense" and the nicole kidman movie "the others" !!! Sure sure...you can call me..not if i call you first though..because even with house full of ppl, i feel scared...especially after writing this story. :D
     
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  10. Jan 10, 2012 #30
    mansimahi

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    thanks deepa...glad you think it is wow :)
     
    mansimahi, Jan 10, 2012
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