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Hindi poem..I wrote..Baarish

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by AnshuSinha, Sep 26, 2008.

  1. AnshuSinha

    AnshuSinha Senior IL'ite

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    Yeh barish ka mausam.....
    Yeh dil ka machalna..........
    kash hota yeh tufaan.......
    na aate hum bahar........

    fir kambal mein hoti lambi neend........
    maja aata itna dil jata bhar......
    magar kyon hoga aisa.........
    kyonki maine jo chaha........

    Yeh barish ka mausam.......
    hai sawan sa mausam....
    na hota koi kaam......
    kash ek din aisa hota......


    Rehte Adam aur Eve......
    barasta ishwar ka vardaan......
    aata sab kuch jholi mein.....
    bin maange....bin khate.........

    kash hota aisa.........
    yeh barish ka mausam........

    I dont know how u like it but I wrote it when I was simply writing an email...may be I need to improve on it...
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Greeter Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Anshu
    Excellent poem.
    You have put in the words very beautifully. enjoyed reading your barish ka mausam.........
    Ya we feel like to sleep for long time and sit in the gallery and watch the rains with something hot chatpatta to eatBig Laugh
    If we start getting everything before asking then how will you enjoy the life. I enjoyed rains when I came to India this time during july and august it was too much but still better then not having rains at all which I don't get to see here in Egypt.:)
     
  3. Geetha Iyer

    Geetha Iyer New IL'ite

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    Nice poem. I enjoyed it. Only Mumbaikars can enjoy the mansoon. I see that whenever first mansoon rain comes every one gets to the streets and want to get wet while dancing with the belief that doind so will immunise health for the rest of mansoon season. Here is my additional lines to your poem.

    yeh barish ka mausam
    gharam pakora ka mausam
    yeh barish ka mausam
    rishthadoron ke saath judneka mausam

    yeh barish ka mausam
    baadalon ka rangeela mausam
    yeh barish ka mausam
    bhoond bhoond se bharish
    kidikionme ghir ke
    sangeeth denewala mausam

    Please excuse me if my Hindi is not pure.

    Regards,

    Geetha Iyer
     
  4. uthra

    uthra Junior IL'ite

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    great one ! brings the rainy climate before the eyes
     
  5. AnshuSinha

    AnshuSinha Senior IL'ite

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    Thanks a lot guys for the appreciation.
    Could not respond earlier as I went to India for Durga puja.Just came back today.

    Anshu
     

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