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Harmony

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LakshmiKMBhat, Apr 23, 2017.

  1. LakshmiKMBhat

    LakshmiKMBhat Gold IL'ite

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    We live in a small place. Not far away, the hill sides are one of our favourite places. We go there often, sit and just watch the sun set over the Arabian sea. The problems of the world seem far away. I find the haiku and tanka form of poetry fascinating. I enjoy matching the idea with number of syllables. It is fun.

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    "The flowing river
    Sun setting over the sea
    Trees in the distance
    Breeze from the sea touching us.
    There is peace and harmony."

     
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    Mistt IL Hall of Fame

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    Beautiful image and post too.... Yes, I often watch Nature through our patio door, windows and forget somethings which make me sad......
     
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    You have expressed your feelings beautifully :) I am not very good at the regular poems, but I enjoy Haiku and tanka. Here rhyming is not important. The idea and the number of syllables are. Thanks you :)
     

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