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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by periamma, Dec 26, 2017.

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  1. Dec 26, 2017 #1
    periamma

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    GOD is my MOTHER
    When HE wipes my TEAR
    God is my FATHER
    When HE Shows a PATH
    God is my FRIEND
    When Pointing my BLUNDER
    GOD is GOD
    Who keeps mum
    When I blame HIM
    For my Mistake
     
    periamma, Dec 26, 2017
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  2. Dec 26, 2017 #2
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    nice one mmaa

    so god is mum like husbands :):):)
     
    GoogleGlass, Dec 26, 2017
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  3. Dec 26, 2017 #3
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    Kanavane kankanda Deivamnu solla vareenga.
     
    periamma, Dec 26, 2017
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    illammaa ooma saamiyaar nnu :)
     
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  5. Dec 26, 2017 #5
    Thyagarajan

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    :hello:..mmmm Super Amma super Periamma thanks. Hari Lekhra was wondering who stands between Him and the God. You had I believe, by above thread given him the perfect answer.
    Regards.
     
    Thyagarajan, Dec 26, 2017
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    @Thyagarajan Thanks for your response brother.No one can stand between us and God except our own false thoughts.
     
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  8. Dec 29, 2017 #8
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    Good one.
    I just took your words and re-phrased it ....

    Mother is my God
    When she wipes my Tear
    Father is my God
    When he shows my Path
    Friend is my God
    When he/she points my Blunder
    God is God
    When he keeps Mum
    Accepting my blame ....
     
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    HazelPup, Dec 29, 2017
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    :hello:thanks for your Good Idea. Innovating Op as base or foundation to raise yet another beautiful sonnet of edifice.
    Let me also try in the same mode or and mould. Here it runs like this:
    OH GOD MY GOD
    I SEE YOU IN EVERY TEAR
    I LOOK FORYOU IN EVERY MOTHER
    OH GOD MY GOD
    I SEE ONLY YOU IN EVERY PATH
    I LOOK FOR YOU IN EVERY FATHER
    OH MY GOD
    :hello::hello:OH MY GOD
    I SEE YOU IN MY EVERY BLUNDER
    I LOOK FOR YOU IN EVERY HIMALAYAN BLUNDER
    OH MY GOD
    OH MY GOD
    YOU ARE YOU
    I AM IAM
    IN EVERY BLAME
    IN EVERY GAME
    OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
    WHEN MOM IS Mum
    I UNDERSTAND GOD.

    :innocent:Trust I would be awarded not brickbats or boquets
    but a thanks for this slipshod anthology. in case you find couple of lines resembles of any famous poet, it should only be treated as coincidence !!!!!!
    I also seek
    :smash2:pardon from God.
    :BangHead:My sincere apologies.

    :banana:HAPPY NEW YEAR:beer-toast1: 2018
    Regards.
     
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