And sorry no... I don't buy the 'bad english ergo post seems rude' There are many many posts whom we can clearly see that their forte is not english yet they come across kind with the little vocabulary they got. They think twice before using words because they do not want to come across rude. Broken or immaculate, the care they put into the post ,shows. Frivolous use of vocabulary just shows you could not care less what it meant nor made an effort to check. Many of us are not that english anyway as we all studied in india... but people look up words, carefully use them and bring up their language. Not bring up english is perfectly fine but at least caring for the words you throw at others is manners? By the way you have an inspirational story up your sleeve .. there are lot of distressed threads in which it could be really be valuable and inspire people. Using it to package a point is making a waste of an inspiration. At the end of the day its your story and you add value to it. I can just suggest as its an amazing story to tell!