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Full moon night....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Apr 6, 2016.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    It was a full moon night.
    The air fresh, smelling sweet and light…
    sounds of bells caressed the skin so tenderly.
    Thoughts of her loved one was a rhythmic harmony.
    Sculpted in love,
    chiselled with care,
    moulded with strength,
    she stood wide eyed seeking her pair.
    Minutes seemed as that of years,
    waiting to catch a glimpse of him,
    peeking to the far right corner, she cheered.
    He swept her up by her feet,
    only sound was that of their heartbeats.
    Closing curtains bidding the night,
    shadows of them could be seen in the full moon bright
    Love and passion, could not have been more
    perfect and right.

     
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  2. jskls

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    Beautiful choice of words and lovely poem.
     
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    Scorpio you have stung our hearts with this awesome Romantic poem! Whenever I see the full moon I'll think of this sweet love poem!
     
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    PL,

    You stung me now with your lovely comments :) . Thanks so much, appreciate it.
     
  5. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks Laks, glad you liked it.
     
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    Amazing Scorpio. pure love pouring. Good one. Should have continued beyond hehe....
     
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    Hey Aks,

    It's so wonderful to hear from you. If I had continued beyond there would be lot of "censor" cuts by moderators :tongueout::wink: . Glad you liked it. Thanks
     
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    Meenu :)
    A perfect poem on Full Moon Night :) you captured feelings with lovely words. :D
     
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    Hi Latha,

    Happy that you liked it :)...thanks Latha...take care:thumbsup:
     
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    Romantic people like moon and poetry about moon.
     
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