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  1. Jul 8, 2017 #1
    jskls

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    Fear & Hope

    A factor unknown
    An emotion unfelt
    Strong and courageous
    Fear was never felt
    Until now ...
    Drenched in Fear
    Waking at midnight
    With heart palpitations
    Sounding so loud
    Waiting for the
    Darkness to vanish
    Searching for
    A hand to hold
    A shoulder to lean
    A Trusted one to turn to
    A brave heart to listen to
    A warm smile to lighten up
    A gentle grip to reassure ...
    Courage from within
    Being the only option
    Slowly gather myself
    Eagerly waiting for the
    First ray of light
    With HOPE
     
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  2. Jul 8, 2017 #2
    Mistt

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    @jskls
    Your Poem expressed my feelings too. I feel same as you expressed in your poem when I'm in FEAR and looking for brightness with HOPE. Hope your everything fine....
     
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    @jskls Nice lines on Fear & Hope
     
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    Lakshmi! Incredible! Nicely written.
     
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    So beautiful. You write so well.
     
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    superb one ls.

    this single line is the need of the generation. well expressed.
     
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    Dear Lakshmi,

    Desire (Thought) - Disappointment (Emotion) = Truth (Sathya)
    Attachment (Thought) - Infatuation (Emotion) = Love (Prema)
    Action (execution of thought) - Expectation (Emotion) = Right Action (Dharma)
    Action (execution of thought) - Fear (Emotion) = Peace (Shanti)
    Action (execution of thought) - Harm (Emotion) = Non-violence (Ahimsa)

    Viswa
     
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    Beautiful!

    Lakshmi, may your courage always exceed your fear.
    .​
     
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    Thank you @Mistt. Glad that you could connect with this poem. All is well
     
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    Thank you @Itsmylife143 for the appreciation Glad you liked it
     
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