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Episode 35 – part 3 (the end)

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sapthu02, May 3, 2012.

  1. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    EPISODE 35 – PART 3 (THE END)

    The flight journey was so damn tiring. The address that he got was in a place which was almost a slum. SO what does these people do there. What would have happened?

    He reached the hotel first. And he came to know about the address and its whereabouts from the hotel. He needed a refreshment. He called the same phone number once again.

    "Hello Aunty, This is Sathya here. I have come to SG. Will you be available today evening so I can come and meet you?"

    He did get a positive reply. But how can he go to someones house empty handed? He remembered Kani. She is still a kid. What could be her age? So clothes is pretty tough to select. WHat about few fruits and biscuits?

    He picked up few of the things. He did the shopping and set off to meet them. It was already 4Pm. He hired a taxi and went to meet them first. He was dressed in formals. He has seen these people once when he had been to Kayal's house along with Naren. So identifying them should not be a problem.

    Sathya got down near the place. The car cannot come that far and he was asked to walk a few steps down the lane. He finally got hold of the house. It was an apartment. It has around 15floors. The apartment was dirty everywhere. It just looked like it was never painted for few years. There was no proper maintenance.

    He finally got hold of their home and knocked the door. He met them and cried a bit and even decided not to tell them anything about Kayal as of now. But he made all arrangements to get back Kani and Amudha back to India. He called up Mithra and informed about the things that he had heard and went through his life period of 20 days in SG. Yet, she promised not to reveal anything to anyone until he says himself.

    Kani and Amudha was first taken to Hyderabad. They stayed with him. But more than expected Madhu’s wedding was arranged and managed so fast. Those days of 1 months was too much for Madhu and Aravind to wait and less time for the family to make the arrangements.

    It was a small get to gether after the reception. And unexpected good news along with the wedding was Kayal’s pregnancy. It was after the Wedding Sathya could make it to meet Naren and Kayal. He was not able to make it for the wedding as he was held up with his back logs which he had missed for couple of months.

    He did bring Kani and Amudha with him. But he left them in the hotel. He wanted to speak to Naren. He was in atmost anger when he heard what Amudha had got to say when he met her in Singapore. He was waiting for the wedding to be over. But , the anger didn’t subside.

    “I never expected you to behave this way, Naren. You have done enough. You had ruined the girls life who gave you life in getting married to you. You also ruined her family? For what joy? All for money? Why you never asked me anything? Instead of ruining and killing the poor man and taking his daughter for a marriage, you could have asked me Naren, I would have showered you the entire property on you for Kayal’s happiness.

    I didn’t know you can go to this extreme to even screw the entire family’s happiness. When I saw the kid and the lady in rags, I was almost dead. The lady cried and her hubby died in a heart attack, did you ever know that you are the cause of all these? What if Kayal comes to know of the same? Do you think she will live with you anymore?”

    “Stop it Machan, I am sorry. I know these words are not enough. I knew what I did. But I didn’t have the guts to admit them to Kayal after everything changed. I wanted to get them back here and make them live with her. But, was busy with things…..” and before Naren could complete……

    “What, busy? What way? Your sister, your mother, your family and what about others?”, Sathya was indeed furious.

    When Sathya had met Amudha he was shocked and taken back that their only son in law had killed her husband and got them to rags. Amudha and Chidambaram were working in a reputed company and the kid Kani was In school. It was peaceful family life until Kayal got married.

    Naren had informed Chidambaram that Kayal flirted around with so many people and lived with them. By this Chidambaram lost the respect on Mithra’s father as he didn’t take care of daughter well. And the hatred was built against Kayal without knowing the real fact. Naren took this as an opportunity and informed his that he will get married to his daughter if he provides the money that he demanded.

    For the sake of Kayal’s life Chidambaram provided such a ransom money by borrowing from outside and which put him into debts and slowly he died too. Amudha managed to fix the loans that her husband had taken and moved to a different place where she can afford for her living.
    She had tried contacting Naren and that didn’t help. Amudha was furious when she heard Naren’s name. He was the cause for her husband’s death. Yet, Sathya ensured that everything will be ok. He regretted for had happened and explained the entire story about Kayal. Amudha was good at heart. As a mother she knew what Kayal went through and was ready to forgive Naren provided Kayal was happy with him.

    Sathya was not able to digest. He was not sure what was the next step. He pleaded Amudha to come to India so that he can do some thing for her and Kani. It was for Kayal again. More over it was humanity. They didn’t even have any money to offer for their flight charges. That made them stay there permanently doing something for living. But Sathya requested her not to tell anyof these to Kayal.

    Amudha agreed for the same. They were staying in a hotel. Amudha was not sure how Kayal will react after seeing her. Naren was pretty depressed and then met Amudha. HE fell on her legs and asked for sorry. He assured that he will take care of Kani and Kayal well. Though Amudha knew that Chidambaram did everything for Kayal and finally died for Kayal. She was guilty as well. She was the reason why Susila (Kayal’s mother) died. It was her entry in their lives that their family shattered. There was a reason for everything. May be that was karma. She took this as an opportunity to help and serve Kayal rest of her life.

    THE REUNION:

    Madhu was married off to Arvind. Her life started happily and the family was happy about it. Madhu some how convinced Arvind that she will try her best to bring his family together again.

    Kayal met Kani and Amudha. This reunion was awesome. Kayal cried and Amudha asked sorry for what she had done to her mom. Indirectly she was the cause for Susila’s death. Kani did recognize Kayal and called her as Akka. Kayal handed over the house documents of the one which is in Trichy and asked Amudha to stay there with Kani. Meanwhile Naren did all arrangements for Amudha to get a good job there.

    Mithra did come for the wedding. She was there with MAdhu and Aravind. And she did bring Andy as well. So which clearly stated , this time she is sure of her decision.

    Nalini and Sabapathy’s happiness were of no bounds. They were to become grandparents soon and Madhu is married and settled off.

    Amudha and Kani were settled in Trichy. Amudha soon found a job there and finally they were settled. Naren ensured that Kayal take complete bed rest during this period. So he had asked her quit from working. She took complete rest. They had planned to send her to Trichy for her delivery, to her mothers house… Yes to Amudha.

    All is well. All were settled. Happiness had no boundies in everyones life. Sathya was left alone.. If all is well in Kayal’s life, Sathya was happy with his life. When he was asked why he doenst want to marry yet, he just answered “ I have not found Ms. Right yet.. so until then I will wait”.

    Love Blooms and bloomed.. Keeps Blooming all their lives..
     
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  2. shashiv

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    Nice ending with a wonderful reunion of family.... Well narrated Saptu.... Enjoyed very much...



    Shanti
     
  3. swaran

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    Lovely end Sapthu...

    story was great...but never ever thought that naren could have done such injustice to kayal's father as well...
    but looks like kayal's dad and her chitti paid for rejecting/betraying kayal's mother...thats what is life...

    sapthu,indeed a wonderful story..and i wish to read the other ending that you were planning to give for this story....
    would love to read that as well ;-)
    keep writing sapthu..i am your FAN now :)
     
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    Thanks ppl.. So the next story is on the way.. I am not sure which one to choose out of the 2 concepts i have Music of Love or Corpse Love Story!!

    Please tell me which topic you all like as the next one from my end. i will start posting from mid of may..!!:)

    Once again thanks for the wonderful support.. if not.. i wudnt be thinking the 3rd n 4th story now :)
     
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    WOW...!! That's a superb end of the story..!!!

    Story is toooooo good.. but didn't expect that Naren will be the reason behind.. so cruel.. good that he has changed now.. wonderful sapthu.. :)

    Keep writing more.. :)
     
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    Sapthu,

    You can post both the stories.. We will take it is a double damakka offer..!!! :) :)
     
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    thanks upfsabari
    will try to load corpse love story first
    will write everything and post one by one..
     
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    Hello Sapthu...you have ended the story really well with an awesome reunion of all the fmaily member's even Mithra came down to India with Andy...that is really good.

    Ya ya post Corpse love story sounds something funny..so the corpse too have a love story???
     
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    nice ending.. really very good story..

    next story on the way... pls post soon.. :)
     
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    Thanks Aruna and thanks Banu.. ya started writing the Corpse's LOve story Now..
    :)
     

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