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Closer Than It Appears To Be

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Oct 4, 2018.

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  1. Oct 4, 2018 #11
    Rakhii

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    I did not see this coming.

    I am a little confused though. It seems like Akhil was having premonitions. Or are you suggesting that the mirror was actually displaying digital images taped by Shewta and her boy friend upstairs?
     
    Rakhii, Oct 4, 2018
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  2. Oct 4, 2018 #12
    blackbeauty84

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    I'm suggesting the second one Rakhii
     
    blackbeauty84, Oct 4, 2018
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    :rage::rage::rage::smash2::smash2:
    Sad of Akhil :facepalm: BB ma'am as always fabulous & crisp narration :worship2: I never thought these two stupid's would the reason behind all this :BangHead: however I loved the way you carried the story and title sema :clapclap: Insurance kaga ivalovuma :shocked::shocked:

    Thank you. Good Night :hello:
     
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    peddadas

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    oh wow..insane..poor Akhil
     
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  5. Oct 5, 2018 #15
    blackbeauty84

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    Good to see your feedback...Many times people intentionally appear stupid.Thanks Adharv
     
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    Thanks Peddadas
     
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    Good one blackbeauty. Half way through the story i was telling myself its a horror story. But nice twist. Lovely story!!!
     
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    blackbeauty84

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    :) Thanks Chitra Lekha
     
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  9. Oct 7, 2018 #19
    GeetaKashyap

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    @blackbeauty84,

    An interesting twist and narration. I liked the surprise element in the story. Good one!:clap2::thumbup:
     
    GeetaKashyap, Oct 7, 2018
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  10. Oct 7, 2018 #20
    ratan

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    Well narration of the betrayal in relationship & misuse of technology.:facepalm:
     
    ratan, Oct 7, 2018
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