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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Caide, Oct 25, 2016.

  1. Oct 25, 2016 #1
    Caide

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    The more we get close..

    The more we fought..

    Though there is love..

    There was ego..

    Now …

    We are far from each other..

    All I sense is loneliness..

    Yes..

    I miss you…

    And i have no ego to hide it from you…

    I wanna be near you..

    Like before…

    But this time I am sure..

    We won’t fight….

    But cherish and embrace each other…
     
    Caide, Oct 25, 2016
    Caide, Oct 25, 2016
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  2. Oct 25, 2016 #2
    vaidehi71

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    Hi,
    Leave ego and cherish love in relationships and then you would definitely not feel loneliness.
    I am not sure which relationship you are talking, but I was thinking more of a married couple here.
    Take care,
    Vaidehi
     
    vaidehi71, Oct 25, 2016
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    A very relatable poem
     
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    PavithraS

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    Good one, @Caide ! Hope your wish comes true.
     
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    Caide

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    just thought abt how this generation kids are so wrote it jus like that this has nothing to do with me :)
     
    Caide, Oct 26, 2016
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    Caide

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    thank you :)
     
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    Nice Lines
     
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    Caide

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    thanks :)
     
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