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Cheer Up!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Feb 23, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Like that nameless little flower
    You see, ignore and go about,
    Why can't you too be happier
    And spread a smile around?

    Agreed, there may be something
    That disturbs you so much deep.
    Its not the end of everything.
    Cheer up! Its nothing steep.

    Come out and see the world.
    Enjoy the warm sunshine.
    Feel that yellowish gold
    Rays of moon, so kind.

    Eclipses hide them too.
    Yet they do come back
    And shine even brighter to
    Announce their come-back.

    Life can never be
    Just a piece of cake.
    If so, it won't be
    Worthy enough to speak.
     
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  2. Pallavi4me

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    RGS............. did you wrote it for me??

    Seriously i'm looking for some stuff.. to life my moods right now...

    you poems are doing wonders on me... Liked it... Absoultely loved every word of it...
     
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    To be honest, I wrote it for myself Pallavi4Me. Just to lift my moods and face things instead of dipping myself further into bitterness. Happy to see that you liked it. Thanks. -rgs
     
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    So you being in the same mood, helped me too.. Thank you.
     
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    Well. There is nothing personal to me in this. Just that sometimes, you feel so frustrated. And fine, cheer up. -rgs
     
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    Hello Rgs,

    Very nice and sounds lik a pep talk..I particularly liked the last paragraph very much..
    Seems like u have become a full-time poet..

    -Parineetha-
     
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    Not yet Parineeta. But very many thanks for your appreciation and feedback. -rgs
     

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