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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Nov 3, 2017.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Times have changed.
    Seasons have changed.
    Air smells different.
    People are distant.
    Places forgotten.
    Communication a burden.
    Relationships rotten.
    Nothing feels the same.
    Lost in a maze I wander,
    Going with the flow of water.
    Seething emotions turn into a laughter.
    Just another phase of life,
    With the passage of time.






     
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  2. Srama

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    Meenu! Nice to read you after a long time and this time around, it is me logging onto IL and lo! there's a poem by you!

    I do hope fall is making you feel happier than what you have written here :)

    And you know water flows/finds it way around anything that is in it's way - was the thought that came to mind when I read that line.

    Welcome back!
     
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    Sabitha :),

    How are you? So good to hear from you.
    It's an early winter here, freezing :neutral:. As for what I penned here, my poems can be deceiving :wink::smile:. I think of something but end up something, somehow the lost feel suited the lines so I left it as it is.

    Nevertheless all is well, thank you.
     
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    Nice poem.....
     

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