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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Mar 5, 2018.

  1. blackbeauty84

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    I searched for Parental Threat thread and I can see what you mean.
    Thank you for the feedback.
     
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    Thank you Anoosa. Have a great day ahead.
     
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    Thank you Peddadas for the feedback :)
     
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    Many many thanks Hazelpup
     
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    Thanks Sunpa
     
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    Awesome write up there @blackbeauty84
    Loved these lines
    “Everyone has these moments time to time Rajib. Many a times I feel I’m worthless as a mother; your father feels he is a useless son. We all fail somewhere when we compare our self with others. It’s an endless cycle.’ She said patting my shoulders.”

    We all are unique, different and special
     
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    Dear BB,

    Loved your story at many levels. Firstly loved the wordplay. Feel like the 'ay' in Okay. :) Had never thought of that one before.

    Secondly, the perennial topics of pressure to perform academically, comparison between siblings, the lack of sense of self-worth, the different perceptions of parent-child relationships from the opposite sides all made for very interesting reading.

    Wonderful writing as usual, BB>
     
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    Excellent story. I am also an average person so can relate myself much to it. Always feel about myself as good for nothing. But still there are people who love me and make me realise my importance. Its being lucky to have them like the mother in the story. Very well written.
     
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    Very Good Story. If some one feeling low , will feel worthy after reading this story.
    Feel like to read again and again.

     
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    Thank you nandinimithun.
     
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