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At The Right Time

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Oct 18, 2016.

  1. blackbeauty84

    blackbeauty84 IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks you very much Peddadas. I too wish this story happens somewhere sometime.
    As said I will be soon back with another story...
     
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    Atlas finally got over and of course it completed in the right time. Short story and a sweet one.really enjoyed reading it...
     
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    Many thanks Aarthi
     
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    Superb story..
    Very well write up BB....:cheer:
     
  5. blackbeauty84

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    Thank you Sparkle
     
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    Such a matured and lovely story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Didn't look like it was your first time. Please continue writing.
     
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    Thank you Lata6. Happy to hear that you enjoyed the story
     
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    Nice story and nice ending.
     
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    Thank You Stayblessed
     
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    Great story @blackbeauty84 . Loved the different strong and mature characters. Just wondering if Jai would have accepted Priya as a daughter in-law for Srikanth (if the story went in that direction) considering the age difference and that she is a widow with a kid. That scenario I think would be more challenging to accept in a society without "Priya's" character being questioned. I truly wish there is more acceptance to "falling in love" for the second time and remarriage.
     

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