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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Oct 18, 2016.

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  1. Feb 22, 2017 #211
    blackbeauty84

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    Thank You very much Latha Ramesh. This feedback means a lot to me. Many thanks again.
     
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    Rampuri9

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    Lovely story BB - Both Priya and Jai are almost clear on what they want - they were able to understand the meanings of their feelings and were able to take decisions at right time....often we see this doesn't happen(journey from feelings to decisions). Vivaan,, Sriram and Srikanth - all the kiddos are good to..

    Great story and you made us happy by posting frequent updates without much waiting ..

    I liked the story dont want ant struggles in their married life - why don't you choose different names for your next story ..let priya and jai be happy :)

    Will eagerly wait for your next one..
     
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  3. Feb 22, 2017 #213
    blackbeauty84

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    Thank you Rampuri. I'm happy you liked all the characters too...
    I promise Priya and Jai will be happy in there married lifes as they suffered enough already. But yes few challenges here and there which will make the marriage strong...
     
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    creativemumma

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    :crybaby2::crybaby2::crybaby2:
    we dont want any challenges:sleepy:
     
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    blackbeauty84

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    Sure... Challenge was a wrong word from my part...
    I'm gld that you like Priya & Jai so much that you are wishing them a happy married life.
     
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    "I’m bit old for this : either I don’t know how to approach a girl or how to react or I goof up by putting a life in danger."
    -I liked this sincerity of Jai very much.

    Nice soft and mature romantic story :clap2: and thanks for the quick updates.
     
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    blackbeauty84

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    Thank you so much for the feedback Anupama. Happy you liked the character of Jai.
     
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    meepre

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    Hi BB,
    Congratulations on your successful story completion. It was a wonderful journey through the story and a very beautiful ending. Amazing dear. Please do come back with another beautiful story soon.
     
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    Thank you Meepre.
    Will come back soon
     
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    Way too good BB. Everything has a right time to happen and it shows the beauty of life if it does happen.
    Loved Jai's mannerisms ...
    Liked Priya's attitude ...
    I wish somewhere this story should come true...
    Having said all these things BB, thanks to you for giving us a story, your first story to us. Appreciate your efforts to write one episode everyday.
    Please try to come with one more story for all of us.
    PS
     
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