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"and Suddenly You Became My Everything" - The First Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, May 15, 2018.

  1. Adharv

    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    Priyaaaaaaaa sis I still have hopes on Harshad wait madi.

    Recall how this guy was introduced.. and connect to the current epi. I suspect something fisy….may be we need to appoint some detectives to find the mystery.
     
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    Waiting to hear what Anbu has to say..:thinking:
    Story is going great.. :thumbup:Looking forward for the next update..
     
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    Iniya nice going. Loved all the episodes. It’s like a novel. Awesome narration. Wonderful building of characters. You are a great writer.

    Life is so unpredictable for Madhu. Can’t be with ones she cares about and the one she is with there’s no love between them. So tough life for poor Madhu and all for no fault of hers. Will her worries end and can she ever be happy ? Waiting to read complete story.
     
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    Oh are we back to current time.. Lovely
     
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    Loved all d episodes. Writing style very good. Good going Iniya mam.
     
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    Plz plz plz upload new episode asap. Dying to hear what Anbu has to say:coldsweat:
     
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    Episode 45:


    “Anbu?” – Madhu hesitated to pick his call.

    “Why is he calling me at this time?!” – Madhu


    “Hello” – Madhu

    “Hello Madhu! My wife quarrelled with me and she cut her…” – Before Anbu finished, Madhu was feeling nervous.

    “What?! What happened? She cut her…” – Madhu

    “Madhu!!! Don’t get tensed! Nothing Nothing” – Anbu continued

    “She cut her wrist! So we have come to the nearby hospital” – Anbu

    “She is ok?” – Madhu gasped with fear.

    “Yeah! Good that she didn’t cut her veins! But things have gone really worse between us” – Anbu

    “I know… It is because of me. Because of my tears….” – Madhu said and Anbu did not know how to respond.

    He can neither say yes nor no.

    “Anbu! Take care of her! We will talk tomorrow” – Madhu cut the call.


    “What happened? Anbu huh?” – Madhu’s mom entered the room.

    “Yeah ma. Seems they quralled and she cut her wrist” – Madhu replied hiding her fear

    “What?!” – Mom

    “Yeah ma” – Madhu

    “Poor guy! But why did they quarrel?” – Mom

    Madhu was feeling too guilty.

    “Don’t know ma! Got to talk to him tomorrow!” – Madhu

    “You said he is going to Sweden na” - Mom

    “He cancelled it ma…” – Madhu

    “Cancelled? But why?! You said his wife is too happy about it?” – Mom

    Yeah! everything was good! Until I cried to him. I am the reason for everything. I am the one who is troubling others

    “Don’t know ma. Seems he doesn’t want to live away from everyone…” – Madhu

    “Yeah but still! When his wife will be happy and it assures him peace, he should go for it” – Mom

    “Maa.. I am feeling sleepy! Going inside! Good night” – Madhu

    “Maa did you call him? Told him about Krish’s wound?” – Madhu looked at her mom

    “Yeah! He came in the evening and left! Seems he is going to be with his mom.” – Mom

    “Till when?!!” – Madhu wondered and her mom didn’t have an answer.

    Both the ladies knew that Madhu’s married life is not going in a right direction.


    Madhu lied beside Krish. Krish was in deep sleep. She closed her eyes gently. Opened it in few seconds


    Anbu…..

    Why did you come into my life

    Why were you good to me

    Why were you affectionate to me

    "Madhu! Don’t get too emotional! First find out whether you love him or not "– She asked herself.

    He is very friendly, good to talk with, good to share problems, a good friend – Madhu replied

    “Just friend?” – Her inner self questioned her back

    “Don’t know” – Madhu tried to escape

    “You got to think Madhu. Dig deeper. Face yourself! Find yourself! And then fix the problem” – A small voice said from within

    Suddenly she got reminded of the moments he spoke with his wife.

    I hated to see him smiling or laughing when his wife calls him.

    Though rarely he smiles with her, it was disturbing me a lot. I didn’t like his wife calling him.

    I hated his smile. I didn’t like him for those few minutes. I hated him whenever he smiled with her.

    Madhu took a deep breath getting reminded of her ugly thoughts.

    If I really love him will I hate his smile? Will I get irritated if he laughs heartily?

    Definitely not.

    The other day when he came home, I didn’t even bother about his problem and all of sudden I attacked him with my own doubts on the relationship.

    I shouldn’t have done that. But I did that to safeguard my heart. I didn’t even bother about his feelings or circumstances.

    Madhu kept thinking each and every instance about herself and Anbu.

    Now his family life is under threat and the only reason is Madhurimaa. Me.

    But how dare he is ?! Cancelled his onsite opportunity just for me?

    Is his feelings for me is that deep to sacrifice his personal life?

    Is it right?

    Neither he nor me has the guts to talk things.

    Is it right? Madhu asked her once again.


    Just imagine Madhu. For a moment, Imagine a woman in Anbu’s place.

    You would have been the same with her. Shared your problems, shared your food, would have have good time with her. But by then problems would not have come!

    But here…He is a man and am a woman! That’s why everything is a chaos.

    Fine! This is not going in the right direction! So let me put a full stop to this!

    Let me not talk to Anbu here after! Let him proceed with his life. And Let me proceed with mine. Though I don’t know where it is going…



    Time was 11 in the morning and Anbu reached late.

    “Good morning Madhu!” – Anbu

    “Come to the cafeteria” – Madhu got up from her chair

    “See! We both know that things are not going in the right direction! So lets put a full stop here! Go and talk to your manager and carry on with your Sweden plan! If you don’t, I will quit my job right now”

    “What?! You will quit and what will you do?! This is your only source of income Madhu” – Anbu was getting anxious

    “If you don’t go to Sweden, I will quit my job right now! I don’t want to have lengthy conversations about our relationship! Lets keep it crisp! You are going to Sweden and am going to carry on with my life. That’s it” – Madhu said firmly

    “Fine” – Anbu left. He understood something. That Madhu has taken a solid decision and its better to follow that for everyone’s sake.

    “Bye” – Madhu said and Anbu nodded his head.



    “Maa….Came home early?” – Krish smiled at her.

    “Yes my boy” – Madhu kissed him gently

    “Take rest! I will be back” – Madhu came out of the room.

    She took her laptop and opened the job portal websites.

    She updated her resume and closed the laptop.

    “Vaasu….” – The neighborhood lady once again ran behind the small boy.

    “ufff” – Madhu sighed.

    "Maa....they have shifted here recently?" - Madhu

    "Yes! Seems to be a nice family. That kid Vaasu is really cute" - Mom

    She closed her eyes.

    “That girl…Aadhiraa…..How she is….And her friend…Shalini? No no! Shreya….”

    “And the girl who all of a sudden advised me on Vaasu’s death….Indhu….How is she now”

    And that guy who slapped his friend….I think his name is Ganapathy? Ganesh? Something like that….

    What happened to their lives. They are all happy with their lives or suffering just like me?
     
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  8. VidyaSuresh

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    Nice episode Iniya, we were in flashback suddenly when u had mentioned about Krish I was wondering who is Krish I had forgotten his name as we were in flashback and then realised you have come back to present, sudden twist coming to present scenario, its interesting. Pl. tell about adhira, indu, ganesh, harshad, tharun, manish . Always feel why your each episode ends and wish it should be still long, waiting for next episode. You are awesome writer Iniyaa.
     
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    Thanks dear!!! Nice to see your feedback : )
    Have posted today's episode!
    Have a lovely week ahead : ) : ) : )
     
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    Dont you know me:smile:

    Well said : )

    Thank you so much darling! Have posted today's episode! Have a wonderful week ahead : )
    Hugs to you : )
     
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