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"and Suddenly You Became My Everything" - The First Love

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  1. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Prank huh:rolleye: madam eh.... He he he:lol: Twist huh...apdilaam onnum illaye ( Nothing of that sort):tonguewink:
    Happy that you are liking Aadhiraa and Ganesh!
    Thanks dear!
    Have a great day:thumbsup:
     
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    Whats up for Aadhiraa...Lets wait and watch!
    Yeah Ammu! He is angry on Vaasu for taking such a decision and leaving him all alone...
    Have posted today's episode dear!
    Good day : )
     
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    Iniyaa interesting update :clap2::clap2:

    Still something looks fishy with Tarun's act...Dei what did you to my bro :boxing::boxing: harshad is done with his play in the series???

    Why most of them are focused finding their life partners :confundio1::confundio1: if it continuous like this in near future instead of searching life partners you will be running behind investment partners like Chandran :nono: :BangHead: Poi padding da (go and study) later you will become suppli candis :facepalm::facepalm: however Iniyaa your portrayal of the teen group is very realistic and elegant.

    THank you and keep rocking. Great evening.
     
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    oh wow..I read all episodes at once...so many stories poor Vasu..and something fishy with Harshad
     
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    Episode 43:


    Indhu and Shreya were walking towards the tuition and Manish was waiting for her already.

    “Wow!!!! How beautiful she looks” – Manish couldn’t take his eyes off from Indhu.

    “Looking like an angel. Isnt she?” – Manish looked at Nirmal and Nirmal gave a dry stare.

    “Just for her I came here. I think she is wearing a new dress. May be for me? -Manish smiled.

    “Maybe she started liking you.Who knows? Most of the time, beautiful girls end up marrying stupids!” – Nirmal

    "I dont mind you calling me as stupid if she is going to marry me!" - Manish gave a wide smile and Nirmal frowned.

    “But she is not even looking at me daa” – Manish

    “All girls do that” – Nirmal

    “No problem! I will keep seeing her for the next one hour” – Manish was about to get into his dream

    “Excuse me! Before you get into your dream, you will be out from the classroom! The master is very strict” – Nirmal whispered.

    Indhu was sitting beside Shreya and both kept talking.

    Indhu’s eyes were searching for Madhurimaa.

    “Hey…You are Madhurimaa right?” – She asked at once her eyes met Madhu’s.

    “Yeah!” – Madhu smiled slightly.

    “You are ok?” – Indhu

    Madhu rolled her eyes. “In what sense?” – Madhu asked softly.

    “I know how much Vaasu loved you. I know how much he wanted to propose you and keep you happy. I know you would have been in shock knowing about his death. So am asking this question” – Indhu wanted to tell everything.


    “I heard you were not well. So just asked.” – Indhu managed

    “Yeah am recovering!” – Madhu

    “Listen Madhurimaa! You cant be the reason for someone else’s decision! You did not do any mistake! Just live your life to the fullest! Don’t worry about anything else! And please take care of your physical and mental health” – Indhu blurted out.

    “She is talking about Vaasu? She knows him?”
    – Madhu did not know how to ask her since Vaasu is a secret according to Madhu.

    “Don’t think much! Just take care of yourself!” - Indhu smiled.

    Before Madhu could ask her, the master entered the classroom and everyone became quiet.

    “Indhu!? Done with talking?! How can you keep talking 24*7? “ – The master

    “Sir” – Indhu gave an embarrassing look.

    “Sit down” – the master

    “Her name is Indhu….hmmm.” – Madhu said to herself.



    “You know what…..Her birthday is nearing. I want to gift her something.” – Manish said as they were walking out of the class.

    “You? Gonna gift her? First talk to her. Then lets see” – Nirmal smirked

    “She is running away from me. What to do. Even If I talk to her, I don’t think she will get the gift from me. Moreover her parents will ask right” – Manish kept thinking

    “Then?! How you will gift her” – Nirmal.

    “I am going to pass the gift through someone” – Manish

    “Someone? Who? Don’t even look at me. I will never do that” – Nirmal

    “No no not you! Saw a new girl with her na! Will catch her” – Manish

    “Thank god! I didn’t get caught” – Nirmal



    Shreya was walking slowly towards her house.

    “Oye!” – Manish said and Shreya turned her head.

    “You are Indhu’s friend right…I need a help” – Shreya

    “I see! Heard lots about you by the way” – Shreya smiled naughtily

    “Heard? What did Indhu say? She loves me right?” – Manish asked eagerly

    “Loves you? You have teased her too much that she wants to run away from you wherever she sees you.” – Shreya

    “Oh God! Really? She doesn’t like me?” – Manish

    “She neither likes nor dislikes. Just that she is afraid of you. Because you keep teasing everyone” – Shreya

    “Hmmmmm” – Manish kept thinking

    “Fine! What help you need from me?” – Shreya

    “Shall we sit somewhere and talk?” – Manish

    There was a café nearby and both walked towards that.

    “I am planning to buy her something. For her birthday. Can you please pass it on?” – Manish

    “What if she becomes suspicious of the gift?" - Shreya

    “hmmmm you are right” – Manish

    “Also! People at her home will find out if you give any suspicious gift” – Shreya warned him

    “Above all! Am very new here. And am not her close friend. So she will definitely be suspicious! She might infact return the gift. Who knows” – Shreya shrugged her shoulders.

    “You are right! Let me think” – Manish kept thinking and Shreya kept looking at his sincereness.

    “Awesome! I will gift her a painting! So that she can hang on the wall” – Manish

    “Painting on what?” – Shreya got curious

    “May be God painting?” – Manish was becoming brilliant

    “Wow!” – Shreya

    “You go to her house on her birthday! Give this in front of her parents! She cant return the gift in front of her parents! And her parents wont question her seeing the god painting. What say?” – Manish

    “Awesome” – Shreya was dumb struck

    “Heard you are behind her for years…. How many years?” – Shreya

    “I don’t know. But for many years. Don’t know why I like her” – Manish smiled and Shreya liked the sincerity.

    “By the way….friends?” – Shreya gave her hand

    “Hmmm ok” – Manish gave his hand without much interest.

    “Shreya! Whenever you get chance, Please tell her that am in love with her…I mean sincerely!” – Manish

    “Hmmm let me try my dear friend” – Shreya smiled and both walked out of the café.



    “He didn’t come to school today! May be tomorrow he will be coming! Or good if he doesn’t turn up at all “– Aadhiraa said to Shylajaa

    “Hmm! Embarrassing to see his face kaa?” – Shylajaa

    “Why should I be embarrassed? He will see how I ignore him. Playing games with me huh? He is such a “– Aadhiraa was about to get angry.

    “Let’s not talk about him Shylu” – Aadhiraa

    It was in next day school Aadhiraa saw him in classroom. It was his usual habit to come early to school.

    “Oops! He has come” – She thought to herself as she entered the classroom. Both Tharun and Harshad were sitting together.

    “Good morning Madam” – Tharun waved.

    “Good morning Tharun! Got to go to the staff room! Will go now” – She left her bag on desk and walked away deliberately.

    Harshad did not know how to react. He resumed his talk with Tharun.

    "So...how is Krishita man? - Tharun winked

    "Ha!! Yeah she is doing pretty good" - Harshad

    "Pretty good or you are saying your girl is pretty?" - Tharun pulled his legs and Harshad blushed.
     
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    :rolleye: Your bro is no small kid my dear :tongueclosed: lol:lol:

    We will get to see!:buenrollo:

    :roflmao::roflmao::roflmao:cant stop laughing!!!!

    Thanks darling!

    Have a colorful weekend:thumbup:
     
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    PS!

    Thanks for stopping by and reading! : ) : ) : )
    Happy to see your comment : ) : ) : )
    Will be glad to read your thoughts on future episodes as well!
    Have a wonderful weekend:blush::blush::blush:
     
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    Ladies!

    Planning to post one more episode in the evening! Happy weekend : ) : ) : )
     
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    You are always great :)

    By the way wanted to tell you something i was typing "iniya" instead of "Indusladies" in google.
    This is your stories impact Iniya madam :) :beer-toast1:
    Have a nice day :)
     
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    Waiting :)

     
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