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An Enigma

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Apr 25, 2019.

  1. Adharv

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    what a pity what a pity ;) You are too late @muggs ma'am we are all busy in their wedding plans. Geeta ma'am will break the ice soon :hearteyes:
     
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    Good idea. I will come at lunch time..:clapclap:
     
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  3. GeetaKashyap

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    :hearteyes::p
     
  4. Mistt

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    Geeta,
    Liked the end part too and loved your narration. Now either Simran or Angad aren't alone. I liked Angad's positive thinking and mature levels. One more thing,Their dad and Angad's mom united after death. (Dr.Sahani died on December 19th and Dr. Sachdev had died on December 18th). Though true love never dies.
     
  5. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks, dear Mistt, for liking the story and giving a nice feedback.It felt really good to have your opinion.
     
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    Very nice and interesting story. Enjoyed reading your story. You write so well.
     
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    Lovely, both the siblings are very well matured in handling the situation. Kudos for the short story. Please keep writing.
     
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    Dear geets,
    I read all the 3 parts at one go.... I loved the way you have captured the emotions of Both Angad and Simran....
    I loved his maturity and the way he was preparing her for the reality.....
    The last part of the story is for most of us, yes past should be left in past, no amount of cribbing or breeding changes it....
    Acceptance, forgive, forget and no to move on in life is a big thing and comes with loads of practise....
    Geets, a big hug for you for such a lovely story. My day had started with an amazing note.
     
  9. GeetaKashyap

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    Ah! Thank you, dear SpringB, My day has started with this flattering message from you.:hearteyes:
     
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    Sure, dear peddadas, thanks for your kind and encouraging words.
     

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