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A Trip - 10 (Final Chapter)

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by lovelyme, Jan 1, 2012.

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  1. Jan 4, 2012 #11
    amunique

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    Dear it was lovely lovely... ten trips along with you and that couple... and a great message at the end... moving on with life... :) you are a lovely writer... :)
     
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  2. Jan 4, 2012 #12
    lovelyme

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    Hello Unique,

    Thank you very much for your wonderful feed back. I am glad that you enjoyed the couple's trip to the core. Hope you would read my next venture too regularly and comment.

    Thank you so very much.... Take Care... God Bless...
     
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  3. Jan 4, 2012 #13
    deepa10

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    Hi lovelyme,,,
    Wonderful story :) Waiting for your next one!!
     
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  4. Jan 4, 2012 #14
    lovelyme

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    Thank you very much deepa dear for your encouraging FB

    Gos bless... TC
     
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  5. Jan 5, 2012 #15
    shashiv

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    Happy New Year Simi...

    Beautiful narrated...enjoyed from start to final episode... really thrilling....


    Shanti
     
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  6. Jan 9, 2012 #16
    BhoomikaDhare

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    Very nice... loved every part of it.. :)
     
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  7. Jan 14, 2012 #17
    prana

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    Nice story dear with eccellent narration..Simple yet beautiful narration..
    Though its a kind of thriller story, you showed the love and affection of that lovely couple..
    Nice way of ending the story..keep up the good work!!all the bets for your future works lovely...
     
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  8. Jan 15, 2012 #18
    lovelyme

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    Dar Prana,

    Thank you so very much for your compliments. I am happy that you all liked my work though its my first venture. Please keep reading my new novel, Oh! Those Blue Eyes.... and let me know how you feel...

    and Bhoomika dear thank you very very much to you too...

    Love,

    Simi..
     
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  9. Jan 15, 2012 #19
    lovelyme

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    Thank you very much Shanti dear... for your encouraging FB.. I am very pleased to get you as my reader. You are one of my precious readers.. Please keep reading my new novel, Oh! Those Blue Eyes... and let me know your comments..

    Love,

    Simi..
     
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  10. Jan 28, 2012 #20
    Kamla

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    Dear Lovelyme

    Thanks for taking me along with you on this very adventurous trip. I started reading your serial story thinking I would read three chapters at a time. To tell you the truth, I finished reading the whole story in one sitting! Loved the way you described the scenery, the drive through wilderness and the suspicious incidents had me sitting on an edge with each and every adventure the hero faced.

    You have a knack to narrate a mysterious tale and hold the interest of the readers.

    I wish you a lot of success with your writings. Congratulations on being nominated to the FP of the month. :thumbsup :)


    L, Kamla
     
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