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A Surprise Gift - Short Story

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by vash, Mar 15, 2018.

  1. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Vash such a lovely story you took me back to my childhood, mine is a very very hugh family, the way we use to run in the fields, fight with our siblings offcourse we do that even today:blush:. Even though my kid has grown and is married:grinning:
    Loved your write up.
     
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    vash Silver IL'ite

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    Thanks a LOT!:) Though we are grown up there is always a child inside us. :smiley: While i was writing this story I went back to my childhood days too.:relaxed:
     
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    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    Mother son's bonding, love , responsibility(as a mother and a teacher), son's responsibility he knows what is happening around..and the blend is so good. But do kids at that can be so responsible ? If yes, how can that be achieved?
     
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    vash Silver IL'ite

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    Thanks for reading. :blush: Yes, of course there are kids who are matured enough to understand their parents I've seen some of them. As far as how that is it possible, might me parents upbringing or may be god's gift.:blush:
     
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    stayblessed Gold IL'ite

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    Beautiful beautiful Vash. The feelings of a working mother's regret and the way she tries to balance it is shown beautifully. The son's characterisation is so cute. If children are like this then no tension for parents.
     
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    vash Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you so much for reading. :blush:
     

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