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**A small kavitha**

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by maanasa, Mar 31, 2009.

  1. maanasa

    maanasa Silver IL'ite

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    Hello IL members. here is a small kavitha from me. this kavitha is written in Malayalam language.




    Himakanangal thazhukiveena haritha vanikayil oru,
    himabinduvaay njan jenichuvenkil aa,
    hima binduvin athmavinullile
    himashythyamakaan kazhinjuvenkil !


    Pulariyil ithal viriyum poovinullile oru,
    madhukanamaay njan jenichuvenkil aa ,
    madhuvin manicheppinullile,
    maadhuryamakaan kazhinjuvenkil !


    Thamassil kannu chimmum thaara ganangalil,
    oru kunju tharamaay jenichuvenkil
    nilaavin paalkadal ozhukumpol,
    oru minnamingaakuvan kazhinjuvenkil !


    Mohangalokkeyum swapnangalaakumpol,
    ennum ee swapnangal kanduranguvan,
    ammathan madithattil ennennum ,
    oru ilam pythalaakuvan kazhinjuvenkil!




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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Manasa,

    Good poem. the flower,the star :thumbsup:thumbsup

    (could understand) may be you should put a translation so that every body can enjoy them/
     
  3. maanasa

    maanasa Silver IL'ite

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    yea yea.. thanks for the reply shanvy.
     
  4. Thenmozhi2009

    Thenmozhi2009 Bronze IL'ite

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    njanethi manasa :)...kavitha nannayi..veendum ezhuthunnille
     
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  5. krishnendu

    krishnendu Bronze IL'ite

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    maanasa.
    nice poem..
    etra manohara swapnangal.......:)
    avsana vari athu njyan palaapolum enganae parayanamennariyathae poya ennal parayan kothichatu........
     
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  6. maanasa

    maanasa Silver IL'ite

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    ha ha..ingethiyo ?:thumbsup welcome thenmozhi :) and thanks for the reply.:cheers
     
  7. maanasa

    maanasa Silver IL'ite

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    hai krishna.. mohangal okkeyum nadakkillallo.:) really very happy to know that you enjoyed :)
     
  8. Paulina

    Paulina Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Maanasa,

    Kavitha vayichittu vallarey santhosham thoni ....vallarey 'calm and soothing' ..
    oru sundara melodyey polley bangi ayee.....onv kurrup sir & Vaayalar ude rachna kal poley hridayam sparshichu.
    Presntation was excellent .....pacha background ...malayam lippi okkey ishtapettu.

    Inniyum kavithakal ivvide ezhuthumallo? Kaathirikkunu .

    Aashamsagal

    Best wishes

     
  9. Ammukutty

    Ammukutty Bronze IL'ite

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    കവിത അസ്സലായി...വാഴിച്ചപ്പോള്* എവിടൊക്കെയോ ഒരു നഷ്ടബോധം !ഇനിയും എഴുതുക...
     
  10. Indulekha

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    Manasa..

    Kavitha nannayi..iniyum pratheekshikkunnu.
     

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