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A poem written by my (8years old) sweet niece !

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  1. indhusri

    indhusri Bronze IL'ite

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    Our Friendship

    I have a friend ,
    One that has been with me since i was born .
    And because of the matter i almost mourn
    We 're getting seperated .

    You don't know how this feels ,
    You're not me , I'm not you ,
    I really am sad too ,
    But i respect that she has to go ,
    And i wish her the best .

    She left : June 16th , 2008
    I wrote : June 15th , 2008 .
    ( In America - California )

    Yours truly ,
    Raksha .
     
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  2. SupriyaDinesh

    SupriyaDinesh Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Indhu,
    Thats so sweet.Very touching poem.This peom triggered an incident.During my school days ,my best friend went to tanzania for summer holidays.We both exchanged long hand-written letters full of such emotions.Convey my regards to Raksha.
     
  3. Devika Menon

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    Oh Dear Raksha,

    I feel so sorry for you. But yes I had felt the same too, when my very best friend moved to South Africa.

    Cheer up dear!!
    Computers and cells are here!!

    So you can interact with you friend
    This definitely need not be the end:))

    Hope you continue to enjoy long lasting friendship with your pal.

    Lots a luv,
    Devika
     
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    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Indhu dear
    I am not surprised that writing poems runs in your family you being a real good one.
    She has written so sweetly and so very cute. Those days and times are so different and things like that make a big difference.
    Tell her she's on her way to become a great poet with so much talent in her.
     
  5. indhusri

    indhusri Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Supriya ,
    Thanks for your nice FB !Yes , parting is such a pain . I too have exchanged long letters with my dearest friend after finishing graduation , as you did during your school-days . Will definitely convey your wishes to Raksha dear ! Thanks on her behalf !
    Love,
    Indhu.
     
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    Dear Devika ,
    Thanks for stepping in here to give your nice FB ! Very soothing words ! I 'll definitely forward this to my dear Raksha ! Thanks a lot Devika - for your nice wishes to my sweet niece !
    Love,
    Indhu.
     
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    Dear AC ,
    I'm so happy to receive your FB ! Thanks a lot for your words of appreciation about Raksha ( & myself too ! ) ! I'm really proud of my Raksha dear !
    - I'll convey this to her for sure ! She will be so happy ! Thanks once again , AC !
    Love,
    Indhu.
     
  8. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi indhu,

    Wow, so the niece follows the footsteps of the aunt...

    Raksha,
    A hug to you dear..I can understand the feeling..

    As Devika Aunty says, these days distances are nothing, you can still keep in touch with your best friend, and do make other friends too..


    A great poem dear..keep writing ...
     
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    Dear Indhu

    Excellent poem. I feel like hugging your sweet niece. Convey my best
    wishes to her.

    As Devika has said now a days we can keepin touch through net and
    mobile phones. In our days it was not possible and had to wait till
    the postman brings the letters.

    May God bless your niece and she will also become a great poet.

    with love
    viji
     
  10. Gowri66

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    Dear Indhu,

    So sweet and cute... at this tender age with a tender heart ! Can feel the pain in her words !

    My wishes to Raksha kutti !!
    I remember one of my friend wrote to me, when we finished our graduation !!!
    ("Don't know whose words are these !!")
    "Heart to Heart,
    Though miles apart,
    My Love to you,
    Will never depart !!!

    With love,
     

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