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A Poem Without A Title

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PoojaShah, Jul 28, 2017.

  1. PoojaShah

    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    A darkning sky
    In the frosty night
    I thought of you
    Although you weren't in sight

    Sitting by a window
    In a rocking chair
    I drank from the cup of cocoa
    And gulped in the crisp air

    I opened a notebook
    And started writing about you
    With every word that I wrote
    My feelings for you grew

    I stopped to think
    How to describe you best
    Because you my dear
    Are better than the rest

    I thought of using adjectives
    But in my heart I knew
    That mere words really
    Can't do justice to you

    Should I go for a simile
    And compare you with a knight?
    Or should I call you
    Whiter than white?

    I prayed to God
    For an advice
    He asked me
    To keep it concise

    So accepting the advice
    Of the God above
    I decided to call you
    Love.

    Pooja Shah.
     
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  2. Anusowmyan

    Anusowmyan Gold IL'ite

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    Naming ceremony of LOVE.
     
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  3. Purple2017

    Purple2017 Silver IL'ite

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    Nice definition of love.......love appears to be a default option for the restless mind...let it be.....where the mind gets the solace and cools down.....after all love is useful for adding stability to the mind...
     
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    teenulahari Gold IL'ite

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    Wow PoojaShah! The poem is so beautiful. Absolutely loved it!!! Cheers:clap2::clap2:
    Love
    Teenu.
     
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    Thank you.:)
     
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    Thank you so much.:)
     

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