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A Perfect Place

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamrakshar, Jan 18, 2020.

  1. Tamrakshar

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    The world is not a perfect place
    Yet, you wanna mould it in your way!
    The poor lives in hunger, without shelter
    Yet, you want all to be happy and gay!

    The brothers of a family are fighting
    Yet, you want universal brotherhood.
    When you stab your buddy in the back
    Your talk of a perfect place is falsehood.

    When siblings in a family are quarreling
    The mil and dil fight for everything
    Your desire to see peace and bonhime here
    I must say is very annoying!

    Don't go against the nature you bozo
    Accepts things as they are
    Stop playing the referee everytime
    And try to fill your coffer.
     
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    Accept my apologies for writing "accepts" instead of accept. 7 was a bit more to have control over my body and mind.
     
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    Good one! Yes, we can't change some things. Once we started to accept the things how they are, we get peace and life becomes easier.:thumbup:
     
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    Mistt and Thyagarajan ji, thanks for your likes! Thanks for your comment Mistt.
     
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    You look like a confused soul! Last time you wrote being money-minded is not good. Here you are advocating relinquishing principles for some easy bucks!
     
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    Well K, you have a point. True, in this poem I am urging idealistic people to come out of their utopian world. I am also telling them to give importance to those issues which matter most in mundane life. My earlier poem was actually against the pretence that the celebrities make in order to promote their forthcoming movies.
     
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