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A First Level Of Promotion From Girlfriend To Fiancée….

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Caide, Aug 13, 2016.

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  1. Aug 13, 2016 #1
    Caide

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    It took time…

    For me to hold your hands…

    Breaking my shyness….

    Avoiding your gaze…

    Struggling to act normal…

    Controlling my nervousness…

    Still trying to hold it tight….

    Being unaware that you will get me a ring of my finger size….

    Though it was little bit loose …

    I am glad you found my finger size…..

    Just by the way I held your hands last time…

    Which was also the first time…..

    In a day…

    I turned out to be your fiancée….

    A first level of promotion from girlfriend to fiancée….
     
    Last edited: Aug 13, 2016
    Caide, Aug 13, 2016
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  2. Aug 13, 2016 #2
    vaidehi71

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    Hi,

    That was really lovely poem. Can literally imagine the scene.
    Wish you the same, in your life.

    Take care,
    Vaidehi
     
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    Lathasv

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    @Caide
    Beautiful poem...Is that real one?
     
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    Caide

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    haha how can i make him spend some hundreds or thousands in a day :D pity guy
     
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    Caide

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    who knows if someone experienced it or not :D i wrote just like that :D if someone had experienced it lucky girl :D wish me luck if you want me to experience it
     
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    Lathasv

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    Of course that girl must be the luckiest girl....:)
    Wish you will be that lucky girl ( lucky Sis) .....
     
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    sangeethakripa

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    Nice one Caide.. the shift the girlfriend to fiancee is beautiful depiction. Visually you brought in.
     
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    Caide

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    hehe thank you :D but i prefer arrange marriage what to do cha missed the chance let me see if i fall for someone or not :D
     
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    Caide

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    thanks ma hope you like it :D
     
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    Lathasv

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    Who knows what happen will in next second.....Somewhere , someone is waiting for you to fall in love with you....hehehe...
     
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