"A Different Life"

SSNmom · Feb 3, 2012

Awesome Mohur!!.. UNtil and unless i read your first comment for the post.. i was reading as if your own story..
Very good narrative skill you have.. Do post more

Mohur · Feb 3, 2012

@sapthu: Its Fiction and not my story. I am 28 & married for only a month.

But thank you for your comment. Its a great compliment that people reading it feel that its real instead of imagination of a 28yr old

Deepu04 · Feb 8, 2012

Hi Mohur,

Wonderful narration. I believed that story is of our own and could not believe that its imaginary. Great write up!!! Bravo!!!

mathu903 · Feb 10, 2012

Mohur,

Even days after reading this post, the story has still not left my heart and is leaving a mark behind.
I have nominated this post for the Finest Posts of IL in Feb.

Mohur · Feb 10, 2012

Thank You Mathu903!

prana · Feb 15, 2012

Mohur, simple yet beautiful story..this so called life takes us in different paths..what to say..

you narrated this story as a first person and u did it very beautifully.