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Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by jskls, Jun 14, 2018.

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Jun 21, 2018 #21

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It was a warm day at the park. Two kids came to the park with their parents. They started playing together. Moms started talking with each other. Kids held their hands on the merry go round. Moms exchanged hellos with handshakes. Kids slid together on the slides. Moms connected with similarities in their own lives. Kids jumped from the monkey bars. Moms shared their jumps in career and education. Kids went on the merry-go-round. Moms merrily shared their happy moments.

Kids ran towards the swing. one caused the other to trip and fall when grabbing the swing. One mom’s untimely words caused hurt in other moms heart. Taken aback other mom left the place to calm herself down While the kid who caused the hurt reached out to the crying child. After sometime teary eyed mom came back while hurt child started smiling with other kids care.

As both had to leave they hugged each other and made a play date again forgetting the fall. Whereas the mom who walked away came back calm the mom who felt offended didn’t say a word. As they left the park with the kids, kids where smiling while the moms weren’t. No handshake no hugs no byes between moms while kids hugged and said byes waving their hands happily.

While in the life’s playground why not adults be like kids forgetting the hurt and just keeping the smiles at heart. Instead they forget the laughter they shared and carry the hurt in them (including myself). It will be easy if we are children at heart always.
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.kid mom then kids moms sentece after sentence scene change with extract of their emotion from ode to monkey jump to swing to collide. A mini montage short film speechless might win you the world around and award and glitterati rave reviews in tabloids.
Hats off to jayyeskayelyes.
Regards.
God BLESS.

Thyagarajan, Jun 21, 2018

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shyamala1234 said: ↑

Dear jskls,
This reminds me a story of Tolstoy in which children forget and become friends again but the mothers sulk on and on.
We have a little child inside but problem is with ego. It inhibits the child within and clouds it. The same kids when they grow up become egoistic again. Scales tilt.
Syamala
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Just what crosssed my mind when I read the story, Syamala! Little Girls Wiser Than Men by Leo Tolstoy

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Just what crosssed my mind when I read the story, Syamala! Little Girls Wiser Than Men by Leo Tolstoy
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Thanks for the story Satchi. Parents should not interefere in children's fight.

By the way waiting for a post from regarding your travel.

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Thanks for the story Satchi. Parents should not interefere in children's fight.

By the way waiting for a post from regarding your travel.
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Yes I do travel in the same waves length.
Thanks and Regards.
God Bless.

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How much should we care about those 'whos'?
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ha ha was reminded of this pic .... Hard to strike a balance

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ha ha was reminded of this pic .... Hard to strike a balance
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. We get free suggestions / opinions just like that in India.

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good baala paadam like bala padam - yethaarththam
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Balamaana baala paadam ... yes it is.

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I prayed God that I should remain a child until my death'.
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@Cheeniya sir, That’s such a lovely prayer. So much to learn from your mother. Thanks for sharing

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We seem to be losing such qualities as we grow older. I think the culprit is ego.
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That’s True @kkrish children teach us so many things. Need to relearn from them. Thanks for sharing your thoughts

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Retaining achildlike heart and mind in this world is difficult . But we can surely try !
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Exactly! That’s what my point is. If we learn to forget and move on life will be more peaceful.

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