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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sigmabeta, Sep 18, 2009.

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  1. Nov 16, 2009 #11
    sigmabeta

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    Dear Lakshmi,

    Thanks for your fb. I think true love can never be extinguished, else its not true love. It was a humble attempt at fiction:)

     
    sigmabeta, Nov 16, 2009
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  2. Nov 16, 2009 #12
    sigmabeta

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    Hi Sai and Meena

    Thank you for your fb :)
     
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  3. Nov 18, 2009 #13
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    Hi Syama,

    Nice one!!!! keep on writting..:thumbsup
     
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  4. Nov 18, 2009 #14
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    Syama,

    I absolutely loved your story- for the style of writing, for the pinch of suspense in it, here and there, and more so for the story by itself. What a eternal way to talk of love. We areso entwined to think of love in a sexist way, that such chaste emotions fail to be exhibited. Thanks for penning such wonderful thoughts. Best wishes to you!

    Arch
     
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  5. Nov 19, 2009 #15
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    very touching love story shyama. Keep watching the world around you, we are here to get some more good stories. You are having it in you.


    love

    ganges
     
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  6. Nov 30, 2009 #16
    sigmabeta

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    Thank you Ixora for your fb. Hope I am able to write more such fiction.

     
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  7. Nov 30, 2009 #17
    sigmabeta

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    Hey Arch,

    Thanks for stepping in here. I was inspired by a scene I kept seeing from my balcony and just tried to think from their angle. The divinity in their love just flowed in my thoughts

     
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    sigmabeta

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    Thank you Ganges for your encouragement. Sometimes like your username, we get a flow of thought, which we convert to words.. :thumbsup

     
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    Nice story.. except that the 2 families won't like them meeting often and traveling together and would consider it a bad name. First we have to worry about parents, then husband and then kids...
     
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