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You And Me.....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Feb 24, 2019.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    You asked me ‘What I do to you?’
    I replied – ‘I do to you what you do to me’
    How can I explain all that I feel…?
    I close my eyes and hear you speak,
    my eyes open I see you near me.
    For reasons unknown…
    day and night I wonder when the time,
    would come for us to meet.
    I want all of you…
    I want to give all of me to you…
    Like the waves that touch the shore and go…
    I fall in love with you every minute that,
    seems to pass so slow.
    I talk to you and express myself…
    but there’s still so much that I want to tell.
    Slow and sweet, tender and light,
    moments with you are so precious much to my delight.
    Words fumble...
    I smile silly love smitten…
    I turn back the time and fall in love all over again…
    That moment when I walked in and our eyes locked,
    Knew you tied a string around my heart driving me insane.
    I laugh thinking about it now...
    I laugh knowing I’m happy and about…

    I love you and will always do…
    Just so you know I would never let you go.









     
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  2. GeetaKashyap

    GeetaKashyap IL Hall of Fame

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    Giddy love,
    Newborn love,
    Untested love,
    Bookish love,
    Lyrical love,
    In love with love,
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    A lovely ode to first love!:hearteyes:
     
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    The second last line caught my eye :), I know that feeling . Thanks for your response Geetha.
     
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    Srama Finest Post Winner

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    Dear Meenu,

    Believe it or not, I saw this the day you posted, but I also know you won't be surprised with that statement of mine. I Read it, meant to respond that day but weekends tend to get away faster than I realize. But this is one of those poems that makes you smile as you go through a day. "I turn back the time and fall in love again"....That is the only way to be in love and in live with love! Knowing that we have this ability to love and allowing ourselves to fall in love again and again is the best thing we can do!

    Meenu, I have to tell you my favorite lines -
    "I close my eyes and hear you speak,
    my eyes open I see you near me."

    Beautiful! You have no idea how much I enjoy reading your poetry - it touches a side of me and makes me smile, every single time! I wish only the best for you, my friend!
     

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