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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BhumiBabe, Nov 15, 2018.

  1. BhumiBabe

    BhumiBabe Platinum IL'ite

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    When you cry, I feel it too
    The day clouds up and I’m searching
    Words and prayers to help you through
    Here I am, too far away
    To ease that pain, that caused the rain
     
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  2. Lalithambigai

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    Wow! @BhumiBabe looking at it first I was like whaat, it felt like I ordered a 1lt bottle online (when I first saw your post under New Threads and clicked it) and ended up finding a 50ml pouch (after opening the carton aka this thread) but eventually realised this 50ml pouch packed the punch of a 1lt bottle :)

    Truly Universal it is. Could be family, a loved one, a friend and at times maybe a stranger too. All of us would have felt these emotions at some point or other. Well articulated. Short n Sweet :thumbsup:
     
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    It's short, so I was hesitant to post, but it felt 'complete' - encompassing the entirety of the emotion with no excess.
     
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    Indeed it is complete. Strange coincidence is it nicely captured all the emotions I went through when I watched a documentary recently. On anniversary of 9/11 I saw a documentary of only phone calls made from the Twin towers on that day, their families, how they got to know, how they felt when their loved one called minutes before they saw entire towers collapse ... it was overwhelming all through and I prayed for all of them. I felt helpless for all the families impacted. It was almost like you saw all that I felt and put it in a nice lil poem. Thank You! for posting.
     
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    Beautiful poem!
     
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    Bhumi,
    Feel for someone/loved one is a beautiful emotion. Sometimes we can't to do anything except feel their emotions and prayers due to other reasons.
     
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