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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Jul 5, 2018.

  1. Frangipani

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    Geeta ,
    This was like watching a drama or a movie scene . Too much of tension . I felt like I was there . But I felt very sad in the end . Thanks for this wonderful story .
     
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  2. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks for your nice fb, @Frangipani.
     
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    well narrated geetha, enjoyed reading like your other write ups:)
     
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    Thanks a lot for the appreciation, @Rampuri9.
     
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    :hello:further development vs Vishnu Priya??????
    Thanks and regards.
     
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    :) Too many distractions in life, Sir. I have started the work and hope to release it soon.
     
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    :hello:sorry to note that you have distractions in life. Passage of time will cure all. I have experienced that once manifested as a mighty issue would always turn out trivial after some time.
    GOD BLESS US all always.
    Thanks and Regards.
     
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    Your concern is very reassuring, thank you very much @Thyagarajan Sir. Inspite of knowing all the theories, experiencing issues practically can be quite challenging at times. I am almost through it.:thumbsup:
     
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    OMG I was expecting something good..but the incident was very well narrated and suspense was held tight till the end. It can happen to anyone's life. The traffic, the distractions, natural calamities etc.,..poor chinu ..
     
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    Thanks for your comments, @peddadas. Well, as you said it can happen in anyone's life. I am writing a sequel and hope to publish it soon. I promise a happy ending there.:)
     
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