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Horror Story : I Am Waiting For You....

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Feb 3, 2018.

  1. muggs

    muggs Gold IL'ite

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    Well scripted story.. You kept the suspense throughout and gave it a beautiful end.. :thumbup:
     
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    Awesome suma. You kept us all glued and ended it connecting all dots. Loved it.
     
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  3. sumalynux

    sumalynux IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you..

    Regarding my English. I studied in a very basic school. State board has English as 2nd lang. But we spoke only Kannada in school.. I read tons of novels but it's all in Kannada. So dint get much chance.

    Only after joining IT company my English Improved a bit. Will try to improve my English thanks.
     
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    Hey Suma ! We are more interested with the story, not with the English standards as it’s not some English literature competition .Main idea of writing is making the audience excited and waiting for the next episodes, which undoubtedly you accomplished it :thumbup:.Good job waiting for other stories .
     
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    sumalynux IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank u so much. You made my day.:cheer:
     
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    sumalynux IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank u so much . I am fan of your stories. Hats off to you. You write so much stories with regular updates.

    Though I am sahm from 2yrs. I am not finding much time with toddler at home. (Not going school so far)
     
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    Thank u so much. Guess many suspected ghost would be Aryans' girlfriend or girl born to Aryan. Not sure if anyone guessed ghost is related to Deepika till very end.
     
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    Thank u so much for reading the story. Horror , science fiction, Time travel is always a fascinating topics.
     
  9. blackbeauty84

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    I have more time, when I'm full time working than when i was a sahm.Being experienced in both the worlds, making time for creative work when you a sahm is tough. You deserve a special kudos, Keep doing the awesome work you are doing.
     
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    Nice one...Happy ending :)
     
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