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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Jul 5, 2018.

  1. zales

    zales Silver IL'ite

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    Ah, I see. Clever! And I played right into that psyche :blush: If you write a sequel, I assure you that no one who reads it will be bored. Please keep em coming!
     
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    @GeetaKashyap
    Right now my mind is raw about children separated at the borders, children stuck in caves, a three year old shot and killed on her birthday party, and my heart goes out their parents in pain.
    So when I read the second part, I was very sad.

    Please, a sequel to make things right for the mom who makes fabulous bisi bele bhath. Please???
     
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    Vedhavalli Platinum IL'ite

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    This story is kind of real. My parents never let me ride two wheeler, all my Friends had/has Scooty Activa. they were so scared, I happen to have only 4 wheeler license. I always thought they are being over protective. Now I feel in thier shoes. I had fought 1000s of time to ride a motorcycle.
     
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    @GeetaKashyap Geeta enjoyed reading part-1 and got pain finishing the second part.Expecting his arrival to give a big hug to his mom.
     
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  5. GeetaKashyap

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    :) Thanks, @zales.
     
  6. GeetaKashyap

    GeetaKashyap IL Hall of Fame

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    @kkrish,

    Sure, I will work on a sequel with a happy ending.
     
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    This is, in fact, every parent's nightmare. I lost a 21 year old cousin, another cousin's life was ruined and a friend of my son who grew up in front of my eyes also met with a similar end. Girls are more careful but... Every parent fights with this fear before agreeing to allow their children ride 2 wheelers. Logic is not to be crippled by fear and imagine the worst!

    Thanks for your comments, @Vedhavalli.
     
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  8. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks for your comments, periamma. Please read my response to @shravs3, vijima and @zales.
     
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    You are a true all rounder :blush:

    Awesome narration...I was imagining the real chinnu and vishnupriya....but I have a doubt..Is this a real sequel
     
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    Geeta,
    Title of the story itself struck me somewhere that ending must be sad but in a positive approach I said that hope for happy ending in my FB after reading first part. I know it was a story still it was never digestible but your narration was as usual awesome.
     
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