1. Have an Interesting Snippet to Share : Click Here
    Dismiss Notice

Eyesore

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamrakshar, Dec 14, 2017.

  1. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    726
    Likes Received:
    1,186
    Trophy Points:
    263
    Gender:
    Male
    Eyesore eyesore
    I am mom's eyesore
    She tells me to study
    I love playing with buddy.

    Eyesore eyesore
    I am mom's eyesore
    She sends me to school
    I love to break rule.

    Eyesore eyesore
    I am mom's eyesore
    She wakes me in early morning
    What will happen to my fling?

    Eyesore eyesore
    I am mom's eyesore
    God please take my mommy
    But, please keep my daddy.
     
  2. Parry22

    Parry22 Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    77
    Likes Received:
    78
    Trophy Points:
    58
    Gender:
    Female
  3. GeetaKashyap

    GeetaKashyap IL Hall of Fame

    Messages:
    3,921
    Likes Received:
    9,220
    Trophy Points:
    460
    Gender:
    Female
    Tamarakshar,

    Sorry, I couldn't grasp the essence of the poetry. :facepalm:
     
  4. MonikaSG

    MonikaSG Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    664
    Likes Received:
    1,006
    Trophy Points:
    263
    Gender:
    Female
    Why you want god to take mommy?
     
    Sunburst, Sandycandy and shri0218 like this.
  5. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    726
    Likes Received:
    1,186
    Trophy Points:
    263
    Gender:
    Male
    Is there no edit option?
     
  6. MonikaSG

    MonikaSG Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    664
    Likes Received:
    1,006
    Trophy Points:
    263
    Gender:
    Female
    Black lines with the time has the edit option
     
  7. shri0218

    shri0218 Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    87
    Likes Received:
    90
    Trophy Points:
    58
    Gender:
    Female
    Gotta agree with her!
     
    Sandycandy likes this.
  8. Sandycandy

    Sandycandy IL Hall of Fame

    Messages:
    1,807
    Likes Received:
    5,249
    Trophy Points:
    383
    Gender:
    Female
    Not dark, rather evil !
     
    momsky likes this.
  9. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    726
    Likes Received:
    1,186
    Trophy Points:
    263
    Gender:
    Male
    Got a lot of brickbats! Dark or evil, some people tend to think in that line. Sorry folks, could not edit!
     
  10. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    726
    Likes Received:
    1,186
    Trophy Points:
    263
    Gender:
    Male
    Definitely, it's not me. I love my mommy. I am representing someone else's feelings.
     

Share This Page