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Oh! Those Blue Eyes.... - 10

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by lovelyme, Jun 5, 2012.

  1. Sofea

    Sofea IL Hall of Fame

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    Great going Simi! I love the narration. But yes I got to agree with Arunarc, please post the next episode faster :-D Can't wait to know what Vidya's reply is!
     
  2. renukasubbiah

    renukasubbiah Senior IL'ite

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    Hi Simi
    I started reading your story only yesterday. (Christmas break, so found time) What a wonderful narration!! Amazing and I was apprehensive about a Saudi girl eloping(?) in search of something/somebody. Since I have lived in SA for more than a decade I know the seriousness of the topic/theme you have been writing. And another love story of Sanjay & Vidya is woven beautifully.
    But it is disappointing that the story is not yet completed. Why? Are you not going to continue? Six months is a very long gap.
    Eagerly waiting for the remaining part of the story.
     
  3. Deepu04

    Deepu04 IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice update ...
     
  4. sreeram

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    @cherrybud, you are just mind blowing and your writing is just exemplary dear. No wonder you just glue us with your narrating style. Just splendid and extra ordinary.

    Your way of describing each and everything starting from the Arab country and it's desert and the way you described about Alz, i have a feeling of seeing her in front of me.

    Please please please.... do continue this story when you have time... As i couldn't just stop myself from imagining the next things...
     
  5. peddadas

    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    Oh..yea..Only afte Priya replied to this thread I could get to it..
    Would you please mind continuing it ??

    This story is so different and cool ..
    --PS
     
  6. leenam05

    leenam05 Platinum IL'ite

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    Simi dear, Loved the episode specially last part. :hearteyes::hearteyes:Can you please provide the links of earlier episodes?
     
  7. leenarajaryan

    leenarajaryan Silver IL'ite

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    @cherrybud Pls complete this story also we need to know what happened to Al Zarka, Sanjay & Vidya....
    Pls dear....
     
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    can you please complete this story ??
     
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    can you please complete this story ??
     

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