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Still Love!!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Anjelin, Dec 19, 2016.

  1. Anjelin

    Anjelin Gold IL'ite

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    If someday I lose my charm and beauty
    will you still admire me?

    If someday I feel low and want silence
    will you still comprehend that reticence?

    If sometimes my responsibilities take my priority
    will you still consider me important?

    If someday I want to quit in life
    will you give me the reason too continue?

    If someday I go away from you,
    will you still find a way to be near me?

    If someday I ever try to hate you
    will you still give me another chance to love you?
     
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  2. jskls

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    Nice one Anjelin. Yes reason to continue is very important ....
     
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    Lathasv IL Hall of Fame

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    WOW ! Very nice .... I like whole poem :)
     
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    Wow.. Awesome lines!!!:)
     
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    Not beauty nor charm, it is Love that keeps heart warm.
    Either silence or sound, it is Love that heals heart's wound.
    Love definitely answers in affirmative to all your questions asked, @Anjelin ! Nice reading.
     
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    Your poem raises pertinent questions on 'love'.........actually this kind of 'bargain' questions are not asked in case of 'love' which is a spontaneous syndrome......but then the lovers should be matured enough to withstand the pitfalls of love and should ensure the continuity of 'love' under all circumstances.
     

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