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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PoojaShah, Oct 28, 2016.

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  1. Oct 28, 2016 #11
    jskls

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    Glad that I got it right ! All will be well as it is meant to be
     
    jskls, Oct 28, 2016
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  2. Oct 28, 2016 #12
    PoojaShah

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    Thnx. :)
     
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    Wondering why she left moon if really interested. There is always a way for finding a solution to the society norms especially this century. Sure, you made me think of darkness during Diwali eve:)
     
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  4. Oct 28, 2016 #14
    PoojaShah

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    Hmm... I didn't mean to make you think of darkness during Diwali :(
    I just posted my thoughts about a certain situation.
    Long story short, She has to think of her parents.
     
    PoojaShah, Oct 28, 2016
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    Hey, don't worry. You forgot the most important aspect of the lamp or even moon. Do you know where it's importance is felt! Of course in the darkness:). See your poem did make me think what is the effect of moon or a lamp! Light:) Diwali is Festival of Lights.
    Be cheerful. :)
     
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  6. Oct 28, 2016 #16
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    :):):)
     
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    PoojaShah, nice to meet your poems. : ) Just started reading them. They are blissfully easy to comprehend yet leave some room for reader's interpretation. After a long time, I feel like talking to a poem by annotating a printed version. : )

    I will ponder a bit on what else could go in place of "let go", as pain is too precious to just let go.
     
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    Thank you so much... :)
     
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    Nice one PS

    A good soul that absorbs all is blackness as the color black does.
     
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    Thank you. :)
     
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