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A Tiny Tale Of Love

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  1. PoojaShah

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    Part 1

    'Rohan loves Priya...', Rohan scribbled in his notebook.
    It was not the first time that Rohan wrote so in his notebook. Actually, the last page of his notebook was filled with the name 'Priya'.

    Rohan and Priya had been classmates since the first grade. Rohan always liked Priya but when they reached the 9th grade, that liking turned into an infatuation and when they reached the 12th grade, Rohan was sure it was love.

    'Hey, Rohan! What's up man?',Shyaam brought Rohan out of his reverie.
    Rohan hastily closed his notebook...Shyaam smiled and said,'We all know about your liking for Priya except of course Priya.' Rohan flushed a little...
    'Why don't you tell Priya? ',asked Shyaam to Rohan.
    'What if she said no...?',answered Rohan.
    'And what if she said yes...?',asked Shyaam.
    'Do you think she will say yes... ?',asked Rohan hopefully.
    'Ask her and we will find out.',replied Shyaam.

    ****************

    'Manaali, just look at Seenu...He is looking so cute today!',exclaimed Priya.
    'You say that everyday...',Manaali teased Priya. Priya smiled and said,'You can't blame me if he looks cute all the time.' Both the girls laughed and gave each other a high-five.

    'Oho Priya..! You are all smiles today... Has Seenu asked you out?',Sakshi bantered. Priya blushed a little and said,'Wish it was true.. !'
    'May your wish be granted...Tathastu!', said Sakshi smilingly.
     
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    So Rohan Likes Priya and Priya likes Seenu ?

    --PS
     
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    Apparently.. :)
     
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    Part 2

    'Seenu, you are one lucky guy... That Priya really likes you.',said Raj to Seenu.
    Seenu was bowled over. '
    'Are you sure, Raj?... How do you know?',asked Seenu.
    'Well, Sakshi told me.',answered Raj.
    'Ahaan! Someone is talking to Sakshi a lot these days!',teased Seenu.
    'Well, to be honest, I like Sakshi and it seems she likes me too.',said Raj blushingly.
    Seenu teased him a little more asking when the wedding was!

    Somebody called Raj. They turned around and saw Sakshi. A big smile came upon Raj's face... And he waved at Sakshi.
    Seenu winked at Raj and left.

    'Why did Seenu winked at you?',asked Sakshi.
    'He did..?...I don't know.. ',stammered Raj.
    'Yes, he did...What did you tell him?',asked Sakshi suspiciously.

    Raj thought it was useless to pretend anymore so he said,'I told him that I liked you and it seemed you liked me too.'

    Sakshi gasped but then she blushed. Raj was all smiles now.
    'So I am right..You like me too.',said he.

    Sakshi grinned and said yes.
    ****************

    Priya, Manaali and Sakshi were talking...
    'So did you see last night's episode?',asked Manaali.
    Priya chimed in, 'Yeah... It was fantastic.! Right,Sakshi??'
    But Sakshi had a faraway look in her eyes.
    Priya nudged her and asked, 'What are you thinking about?'
    'Nothing.. ',replied Sakshi.
    'There is something... What is it..? Tell us.',joined in Manaali.
    Sakshi couldn't help but smile.
    'See! You are smiling without any reason... Tell us what it is..!',said Priya.
    'Okay.. Okay! But don't tell anyone.. ',said Sakshi.
    'Yeah.. We won't.. Just tell us now.', both Priya and Manaali said in unison.
    'Raj likes me!',said Sakshi gleefully.

    'Wow!! You lucky girl! Congrats!.. ',said both Priya and Manaali.
    Sakshi giggled.
     
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    Hmm love and love only stories....
    Will it continue..
     
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    Yes.. I have completed the story. :)
     
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    Part 3

    'Hey, Rohan! Have you heard the latest gossip?',asked Shyaam.
    'No.. What is it? Is it about Priya..?',asked Rohan.
    'Not really... It's about Raj and Sakshi... They are a couple now.'
    'Hmm.. People are getting together and here I am pining for Priya..!',said Rohan sadly.
    'Hey! I have got an idea! Why don't you tell Raj about your feelings for Priya? He can tell Sakshi and Sakshi can tell Priya as they are best of friends.',said Shyaam.

    'You are right, Shyaam. I think I will tell Raj about my feelings for Priya.',said Rohan.
    'Now you are talking... Good luck!.., responded Shyaam.
    'Thnx man!... I need all the luck!',said Rohan and left to find Raj.
    ***************

    Raj and Sakshi were sitting under a tree.

    'Hello Raj... Hello Sakshi.',said Rohan.
    'Hello Rohan! How are you?',asked Raj.
    'I am fine.. Thnx.. But I need to talk to you about something.',said Rohan.
    'Sure man! What is it? ',asked Raj.

    Rohan started speaking then looked at Sakshi and stopped. Sakshi understood and got up and left saying goodbye to both of them.

    'So what is it, Rohan? ',asked Raj.
    'I need a favour from you Raj. ',said Rohan.
    'I like Priya... Can you please tell Sakshi to convey my feelings to her? I will be really grateful. ',said Rohan.

    'I am afraid that Priya likes Seenu. ',said Raj.
    Rohan's face fell.
    'I am sorry man, Rohan. But I can't help you. ',said Raj.
    Rohan left gloomily.
     
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    You said the story was completed. Continuing again.....:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:
     
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    I meant I have completed writing this story... Yet to post though.
     
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    A Tiny Tale of Love (Part 4)
    'Where have you been? I had been looking for you all over. ',exclaimed Shyaam.
    'Hi.. ',said Rohan sadly.
    'Well, that's not a happy Hi! What happened? Is something wrong? ',asked Shyaam.
    'I talked to Raj... And he told me that Priya liked Seenu. ',answered Rohan woefully.

    Shyaam felt sorry for Rohan then he said, 'Don't worry, Rohan. You will find someone better than Priya. '
    'There is no one better than Priya.. She is the best. ',responded Rohan.
    ************

    Manaali and Sakshi were chattering after the class when Raj walked in.

    'Hi guys!',said Raj.
    'Hii Raj... I know you are here to talk to Sakshi... I will go and leave you two lovebirds alone. ',said Manaali smiling and left.

    'Hii Raj.. How are you doing? Did you miss me? ',asked Sakshi.
    'Yeah... I missed you... Did you miss me?',said Raj.
    'Yes.. A lot... ',said Sakshi.

    Raj clasped her hands and was going to pull her in a hug when Priya came in.
    'Oops! Wrong timing..! ',said Priya and left.
    Raj and Sakshi stood flustered.
    'Poor Rohan! ',exclaimed Raj.
    'What? What is that supposed to mean?', asked Sakshi.
    'You remember Rohan had come to talk to me...? He told me that he liked Priya... And he wanted me to have you convey his feelings to Priya. ',answered Raj.
    'Oh! But Priya likes Seenu. ',said Sakshi.
    'Yeah... I know... Actually I told him that....The poor fellow was heartbroken. ',said Raj.

    ********************

    'Hey, Priya! I have something to tell you. ',said Sakshi.
    'Sure.. Tell me. ',said Priya.
    'Well, Raj told me... '
    'Ahem... Ahem... What did Raj tell you now? ',Priya teased Sakshi.
    'It's about you... That Rohan likes you.',said Sakshi.
    'Oh! But I like Seenu... Rohan is a good guy but Seenu is the best.! ',said Priya.
     
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