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Mysterious Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rith, Apr 18, 2016.

  1. Rith

    Rith IL Hall of Fame

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    Have posted just now Deepu. :)
     
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    Oh Rith who is at the door? Who is that?
    Is it George friend who has come back from US?
    Any link with him being hidden?
    Is it Rashika's father? Oh breaking my heads...:smash2::smash2::smash2::smash2::smash2::smash2::smash2:?
    OMG Rith viewing a super thriller story in front of me?
     
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    Oh! Wow! Wat a story yaar.. past two days I hav only work to read ur story Appa it's amazing.... I can't think it's a story, really amazing... super narration @Rith ...
     
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    Aare nahi baba you have planned the story so well, that the twists are unexpected and indeed finding Mr. R is a difficult task.
     
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    Rith since you have stared this story, my nail clipper is of no use to me.......
     
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    Narration of the villa is simple fantastic... Again twist at the end??who is at the door now?? Wat Rohan is planning now??? How these ppl gonna catch Rohan??? Pls post the next episode dear
     
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    tat guy had came back or is it Sarthak who is back to India ??????? :flushed:
     
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    I guess it would be sarthak!! lets see :)
     
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    Again a twist.who is that ?supero super narration.after your description of the villa at Andaman i want to visit there and stay for a day
     
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