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Behind The Door

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  1. curiousgals78

    curiousgals78 Gold IL'ite

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    wow exciting twists Divya. Fantastic narration.
     
  2. BDivya

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    thank u :):):)
     
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    Episode 28 :

    Dev picked up in the first ring as he was tensed and waiting for her call.

    Hello Meg. All fine. is there something that is bothering you?

    Dev. Relax nothing to worry. He is just trying to play nice with me. I know you will be worried thats why I called you. Please relax and dont wait for me. I will be safe.

    Thats ok Meghna. I can wait here. What's going on?

    Nothing . He is trying to advice me and..

    And?

    And he is asking about my whereabouts.

    In the sense?

    He is not satisfied with my BCG documents, it seems. So he has called me here to confirm it.

    What have you told him?

    Nothing as of now. He is on a call right now. So waiting for him.

    Okay. So just tell him about your parents in Kolkata and your apartment here. Nothing else.

    Dev, I have nothing else left about me to tell him.

    Dev bit his tongue and closed his eyes.

    Yeah yeah, right Meg. Call me if needed.

    Yeah. Bye.

    Bye.

    Aman was still busy in his call. He signalled Meg to wait for sometime. Dev dialled the private number and was impatient for the other person to pick up the call.

    Hello Sir?
    ...

    They have targetted Meghna easily.
    ....

    Yeah right.
    ....

    Aman is questioning her about her whereabouts.
    ...

    I totally get it.
    ...

    Thank u Sir.
    ...

    Bye.
    ...


    The line was cut on both the calls. Aman came back and began again. They both were seated in the sofa facing each other in Aman's cabin.

    So tell me Meghna about yourself.
    As you know dean, my parents live in Kolkata and I stay here in an apartment which is rented.

    Have you ever been to Shimla before?

    No. This is my first time here after my graduation. That too it is related for job.

    Have your parents been to SHimla when you were a child or do you hold any memories of your parents in childhood?

    My parents have always been with me ever since I was adopted by them.

    What? What did you say? Come again.

    Yeah I was adopted. I am not their child. My parents adopted me from an orphanage.

    His voice rose. Why dint you tell me before?

    I am sorry dean, but what is it related to y job here?

    He realised his mistake and apologised.

    I am sorry Meghna. Okay tell me. From which orphanage did they adopt you?

    Its from God Bless orphanage in Karnataka.

    What? Karnataka? Not anywhere in Shimla?

    No Dean.

    Are you sure?

    Yes absolutely.

    can you write down the address of your orphanage in this piece of paper?

    With doubt she wrote down the address. Before leaving she asked him-

    I dont think these are anywhere related to BCG dean. But why are you interrogating me?

    Its part of the selection process Meghna, which dint happen for you. SO I did it. Thats all. Your records are clear now. You may leave.

    She left his cabin and wentr out and saw Dev was waiting for her. She told him what Aman had asked her.Dev was shocked but dint show any reacion on his face. He managed with a smile and dropped her inher house. Then he made few calls to the private number and stood tensed. When he turned back he found Meghna standing behind him. He was shocked thinking that she might have heard him speak to that number.

    Let the door open............
     
  4. aarthi28

    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Divya Dear
    Again & Again, you make me to come to the edge of my seat to know what is going to happen next?
    Wow Two episodes .... again another suspense... when is next dear?????
     
  5. Deepu04

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    Omg... Wat a suspense you are building in the story dear... Fantastic narration...
     
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    thank u aarti :):) next is also a twisted suspense ;)
     
  8. BDivya

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    thank u thank u deepu :):)
     
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    :biggrin:
     
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  10. heenamk

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    This reminds me of how novels of earlier used to get published as episodes in newspapers and magazines.. you've got talent!
     

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