I was trying to heal when you came along Trying to fix my broken heart You ripped open my deep wound You shook my world and shattered my soul It hurts, it hurts too much! I’m choking, I can’t breathe! The air, so thick with despair Emotions so strong they make me nauseous I scream and shout and struggle I kick up a storm and throw tantrums Vain, all in vain, nothing can soothe my pain No one can balm my aching heart Oh my love, you tore me apart!
A beautiful start ShabnamF. Kudos! -rgs Love that hurts and almost kills, Rejuvenates you completely. Every moment of yours fulfilled, You feel so complete happily.
ShabnamF, your poem is so intense that t it rips me apart Have hope, Love and time Will heal all pain