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You Tore Me Apart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ShabnamF, Sep 23, 2016.

  1. ShabnamF

    ShabnamF Gold IL'ite

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    I was trying to heal when you came along

    Trying to fix my broken heart

    You ripped open my deep wound

    You shook my world and shattered my soul

    It hurts, it hurts too much!

    I’m choking, I can’t breathe!

    The air, so thick with despair

    Emotions so strong they make me nauseous

    I scream and shout and struggle

    I kick up a storm and throw tantrums

    Vain, all in vain, nothing can soothe my pain

    No one can balm my aching heart

    Oh my love, you tore me apart!
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    A beautiful start ShabnamF. Kudos! -rgs

    Love that hurts and almost kills,
    Rejuvenates you completely.
    Every moment of yours fulfilled,
    You feel so complete happily.
     
  3. vaidehi71

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    Hi,
    Very nice and emotional poem.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Vaidehi
     
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    :(

    Very sad sad poem :(
     
  7. ShabnamF

    ShabnamF Gold IL'ite

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    I know it is. And I'm glad I can share it here. Thanks for reading and liking it :)
     
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    Thats very emotional, but good one.
     
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    Thanks @MNR
     
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    ShabnamF, your poem is so intense that t it rips me apart

    Have hope,
    Love and time
    Will heal all pain
     

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