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Discussion in 'Music and Dance' started by dylanbriscall, Sep 1, 2016.

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    Thanks for being open enough to let me share some tunes with you. I need some feedback on a song called "Someone Worth Loving". Any bit of feedback would be helpful!

    You can listen to the song here: Someone Worth Loving

    Verse 1:
    Is this real, Do these moments count when we're gone, Do the lips we kiss form a bond with the blood in our veins, That runs through our hearts, Is it worth, All the sacrifice, To break free, From the lonely nights, In a complicated city made of tainted glass
    Pre Chorus:
    Now I won't lie, There were times when I thought love was pointless, Times when I thought I was hopeless, To the voices inside my mind
    Chorus:
    Watch me erupt in flames, Then learn to fly, Like a Phoenix does in time, I'll earn wings, Then rise from the ashes from whence I came, These wounds will heal, And mark my soul, Like the road signs on the journey home, And underneath, I hope you'll find, Someone worth loving, Someone worth loving for life
    Verse 2:
    Give it time, This momentum will shift in its place, Realign with the channels of fate that defend the emotions you always pushed aside, For too long I delayed what I figured out, Before water could land on the seed of doubt, That's been growing, And oh it's been growing, For far to long
    Bridge:
    For life I was walking where shadows lay lost some friends that were close to the
    same mistakes as before so I'm not doing that anymore
    Chorus
     
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