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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by daisy2015, Aug 11, 2016.

  1. daisy2015

    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you Deepu04 :)
     
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    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you anupama1 :blush:
     
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    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks a lot angeldreams. Your feedback is quite unique. I am bubbling with happiness after reading it. I don't know if i am that good to be part of writers of India but i am glad I am one of the writers of IL. Rest is in the hands of god. If i get an opportunity, i will definitely give it my best shot.
     
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    Rihana Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Very well done, daisy. The concluding episodes nicely served. Perfect ending. Leaves the reader wondering a little bit, but no loose ends.

    I like the little details you use which make one imagine the scene so well, such as: "While I was taking out my dress for the party the last letter I received from my library friend fell down."

    I just have to find out the answer to one teeny tiny question - with so many books borrowed, did MG ever have too many unpaid dues and late fines? :)
     
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    28neha Platinum IL'ite

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    very nice story:clapclap::clapclap: super narration:clap2::clap2: as like your first story here also secret i think you like secrets lot.:grinning::grinning::grinning:

    daisy i will be waiting for next story with more secrets ;)
     
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    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you Rihana. I am glad to hear that you liked it and happy to know that i didn't leave loose ends.

    Regarding your tiny question....:tearsofjoy: no. there are no unpaid dues or late fines.
     
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    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you neha. Life itself is a mystery. Don't you agree?
     
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    I agree with you :)..previously i use to think such things happen only in movie but after seeing many real life story is agree life is mystery :)
     
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    True. Each day holds a mystery for you in its own way.
     
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    A mysterious ending I must say daisy. Your narration as usually wonderful. Hope to get more stories from yourside. Waiting for the next one.
     

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