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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Aug 23, 2016.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    One came as though its his place,
    Another girl hesitated, but came.
    The third one stood before the mike
    And forgot everything, stood blank.

    It went on and on as those
    Lovely children fancied much
    In being someone else and chose
    People, their parents liked much.

    The Bharathis, The Shivajis,
    The brave Jhansi Ranis And
    The trees and that odd plastic piece
    Came to stage, making it grand.

    The krishnas, Prahlad and Kannappa
    Came too with set pieces with them.
    Some prayed and danced, bringing an awe
    From us and not one child was dim.

    Below them were the anxious
    Parents who toiled so hard,
    Hoping and praying that the best
    Should be theirs, but were quick to laud

    Any kid that did good on stage,
    Though at times a trace of envy
    Came and left like the third page
    In newspapers, and looked happy.

    Perhaps its good to see that many
    Eminent personalities on the stage.
    What we aren't, we wish like just any
    Others and simulate at some stage.
     
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    Rgs,

    Nice poem. Yes, would have been a pleasure meeting all great personality in the same place. Well what and how the kids perform is secondary even though there may be difference but then as you told the parents and others would enjoy it.

    Thanks,
    Vaidehi
     
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    Actually, the parents were more anxious about how their kids will perform and the children themselves were connected to the event later on, cheering any and everyone who was at the stage. It was so good to see, Vaidehi. Thanks for your like and feedback. -rgs
     
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    That is true.
    But anyhow, I never had such stress as far as these events go here, because they are very casual here for the kids. Well, the other stressful things for the parents here had been mostly on the exams and education aspects, which i am sure is the the same for the parents everywhere.
     
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    Dear RGS @rgsrinivasan ,

    Don't we live a sort of dream for our children while dressing them up in the fancy dress competition as Gandhi, Nehru, VOC, Bharathi and Bharat Mata?

    A nice poem! Hope you enjoyed the occasion!
     
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    Hmmm... At least in that event it is not so. But you are right on the examination / education aspects and concerns for parents.
    I liked the kids clapping other kids on stage. Thanks again. -rgs
     
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    Well, we love to. Yes. And there was not a single negative shade that day, Suryakala Madam.
    Was so happy to see a bunch of Bharathis, Avvais, Krishnas, Abdul Kalams and Many trees that day. -rgs
     
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    simply portrayed parents and children feel in such beautiful words very nice
     
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    haha...MR S., you leave it to the little tykes choice, you would see a gang of spidermans, supermans, batmans n pokemons.

    jokes apart, very nice attempt!

    I really love these competitions, though it gives me more work than my son, I love the fact that my son gets to learn a lot from these competitions than from just learning from a book. He could relate to that personality better and went on to ask so many questions for which I had to google and answer him.

    That said, I don't really mind how he is performing. He is so much unlike me with lots of confidence. so you know, thats why my relaxed attitude :smilingimp:
     
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    Thanks Caide for your like and feedback. Happy to receive your feedback again. -rgs
     
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